Corny or Cute

I'm going to make cards for my bridesmaids thank yous and I want to but a poem on front. I wrote this, what do you think?

I’m grateful to have you in my life,
Our friendship means more to me each day;

You’ll stand beside me as I become Bren’s wife,
I wouldn’t want it any other way;

You where there when I need to vent
and turned around mood.

You’ll never know just how much that meant
you have all my love and gratitude.

For being the one in who I could confide
Thank you is just not enough;

Because dealing with a stressed out bride
must have been pretty rough!!!

Please be honest.

TIA,
Kelly
26 days to go
Woo-hoo

It's really cute!!! I love it!!

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Posted by kms71705

You where there when I need to vent
and turned around mood.

You’ll never know just how much that meant
you have all my love and gratitude.

Please be honest.

TIA,
Kelly
26 days to go
Woo-hoo

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I would change these parts...I do not think it iw worded well nor does it really rhyme.

But i liked the rest....

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Posted by RedHead

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Posted by kms71705

You where there when I need to vent
and turned around mood.

You’ll never know just how much that meant
you have all my love and gratitude.

Please be honest.

TIA,
Kelly
26 days to go
Woo-hoo

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I would change these parts...I do not think it iw worded well nor does it really rhyme.

But i liked the rest....

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I think it is cute and the only thing I would change with this part is You were there when I needed to vent and turned around my mood.

Other than those grammatical errors, I think it's very sweet!

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Posted by dkwife

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Posted by RedHead

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Posted by kms71705

You where there when I need to vent
and turned around mood.

You’ll never know just how much that meant
you have all my love and gratitude.

Please be honest.

TIA,
Kelly
26 days to go
Woo-hoo

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I would change these parts...I do not think it iw worded well nor does it really rhyme.

But i liked the rest....

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I think it is cute and the only thing I would change with this part is You were there when I needed to vent and turned around my mood.

Other than those grammatical errors, I think it's very sweet!

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LOL - oops, that's what I meant.

Thanks,
Kelly