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cute idea, or dumb?

legalchef Posted: Apr 10, 2011 02:28 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 02:28 PM

cute idea, or dumb?

i was thinking about getting a bunch of different colored pens for the guestbook and making a little sign that says something like:

Write a message for the bride and groom,
Don’t worry; there’s plenty of room.
Pick up a pen, don’t hesitate,
And feel free to decorate!

I can't think of anything else for the last line so if any of you have any suggestions let me know. maybe something like...

Just say hello, or leave some marital wisdom
-OR-
Just say hello, or leave some marital advice

BUT then what do I rhyme it with??

what do you think?

LoveyDovey Posted: Apr 10, 2011 02:37 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 02:37 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

just say hello or leave some marital advice
the bride and groom want to hear(read) something nice

cait625 Posted: Apr 10, 2011 04:31 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 04:31 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Posted by LoveyDovey

just say hello or leave some marital advice
the bride and groom want to hear(read) something nice

cute ending

and i like the idea too!

SimHawk8 Posted: Apr 10, 2011 05:09 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 05:09 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Try this:
Write a message for the bride and groom,
Don’t worry; there’s plenty of room.
Pick up a pen, don’t hesitate,
your words, wishes and wisdom we appreciate

I like the decorate it's cute.

legalchef Posted: Apr 10, 2011 05:12 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 05:12 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Posted by SimHawk8

Try this:
Write a message for the bride and groom,
Don’t worry; there’s plenty of room.
Pick up a pen, don’t hesitate,
your words, wishes and wisdom we appreciate

I like the decorate it's cute.

oh love this!

and thanks everyone else too!

SimHawk8 Posted: Apr 10, 2011 05:22 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 05:22 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

I'm glad you liked it, I love writing it was my pleasure. I might borrow myself.

I haven't thought about the guest book or anything else like that yet.

legalchef Posted: Apr 10, 2011 05:24 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 05:24 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Posted by SimHawk8

I'm glad you liked it, I love writing it was my pleasure. I might borrow myself. I haven't thought about the guest book or anything else like that yet.

how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

rosatemp Posted: Apr 10, 2011 08:01 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 08:01 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Posted by cait625

Posted by LoveyDovey

just say hello or leave some marital advice
the bride and groom want to hear(read) something nice

cute ending

and i like the idea too!

This

SimHawk8 Posted: Apr 10, 2011 10:06 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 10:06 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Posted by legalchef

Posted by SimHawk8

I'm glad you liked it, I love writing it was my pleasure. I might borrow myself. I haven't thought about the guest book or anything else like that yet.

how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

I like that I this .... I can't think of another phrasing it's so nice of you to offer pashminas to the guests.

MrsTarricone2B Posted: Apr 10, 2011 10:38 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 10:38 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Posted by legalchef

how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

How about this?

We really love our romantic ceremony site
But we've realized there may be a chill in the fall night
Please take a shawl so that warm you can stay,
And keep it as a souveneir of our wedding day.

legalchef Posted: Apr 10, 2011 10:44 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 10:44 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Posted by MrsTarricone2B

Posted by legalchef

how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

How about this?

We really love our romantic ceremony site
But we've realized there may be a chill in the fall night
Please take a shawl so that warm you can stay,
And keep it as a souveneir of our wedding day.

ooooooooh i like!! thanks!!

LKatz1029 Posted: Apr 10, 2011 10:55 PM+

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Posted: Apr 10, 2011 10:55 PM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

I loveeeee cute little poems that ryhme!!!!!! its sounds great!!!!!!!!!!!

SimHawk8 Posted: Apr 11, 2011 01:08 AM+

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Posted: Apr 11, 2011 01:08 AM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Posted by MrsTarricone2B

Posted by legalchef

how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

How about this?

We really love our romantic ceremony site
But we've realized there may be a chill in the fall night
Please take a shawl so that warm you can stay,
And keep it as a souveneir of our wedding day.

I love it!!

thatsmrsr2u Posted: Apr 11, 2011 07:42 AM+

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Posted: Apr 11, 2011 07:42 AM

Re: cute idea, or dumb?

Posted by cait625

Posted by LoveyDovey

just say hello or leave some marital advice
the bride and groom want to hear(read) something nice

cute ending

and i like the idea too!

Very cute!!!!!! I love it!