cute idea, or dumb?

i was thinking about getting a bunch of different colored pens for the guestbook and making a little sign that says something like:

Write a message for the bride and groom,
Don’t worry; there’s plenty of room.
Pick up a pen, don’t hesitate,
And feel free to decorate!

I can't think of anything else for the last line so if any of you have any suggestions let me know. maybe something like...

Just say hello, or leave some marital wisdom
-OR-
Just say hello, or leave some marital advice

BUT then what do I rhyme it with??

what do you think?

just say hello or leave some marital advice
the bride and groom want to hear(read) something nice

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Posted by LoveyDovey

just say hello or leave some marital advice
the bride and groom want to hear(read) something nice

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cute ending

and i like the idea too!

Try this:
Write a message for the bride and groom,
Don’t worry; there’s plenty of room.
Pick up a pen, don’t hesitate,
your words, wishes and wisdom we appreciate

I like the decorate it's cute.

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Posted by SimHawk8

Try this:
Write a message for the bride and groom,
Don’t worry; there’s plenty of room.
Pick up a pen, don’t hesitate,
your words, wishes and wisdom we appreciate

I like the decorate it's cute.

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oh love this!

and thanks everyone else too!

I'm glad you liked it, I love writing it was my pleasure. I might borrow myself. I haven't thought about the guest book or anything else like that yet.

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Posted by SimHawk8

I'm glad you liked it, I love writing it was my pleasure. I might borrow myself. I haven't thought about the guest book or anything else like that yet.

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how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

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Posted by cait625

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Posted by LoveyDovey

just say hello or leave some marital advice
the bride and groom want to hear(read) something nice

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cute ending

and i like the idea too!

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This

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Posted by legalchef

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Posted by SimHawk8

I'm glad you liked it, I love writing it was my pleasure. I might borrow myself. I haven't thought about the guest book or anything else like that yet.

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how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

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I like that I this .... I can't think of another phrasing it's so nice of you to offer pashminas to the guests.

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Posted by legalchef

how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

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How about this?

We really love our romantic ceremony site
But we've realized there may be a chill in the fall night
Please take a shawl so that warm you can stay,
And keep it as a souveneir of our wedding day.

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Posted by MrsTarricone2B

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Posted by legalchef

how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

---

How about this?

We really love our romantic ceremony site
But we've realized there may be a chill in the fall night
Please take a shawl so that warm you can stay,
And keep it as a souveneir of our wedding day.

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ooooooooh i like!! thanks!!

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Posted by MrsTarricone2B

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Posted by legalchef

how bout one for my pashmina basket then?

i've come up with this but i don't love it...

It’s a lovely fall night,
But its outside for the ceremony site.
Take a shawl to ward off a chill,
From the bride and groom with their goodwill.

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How about this?

We really love our romantic ceremony site
But we've realized there may be a chill in the fall night
Please take a shawl so that warm you can stay,
And keep it as a souveneir of our wedding day.

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I love it!!

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Posted by cait625

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Posted by LoveyDovey

just say hello or leave some marital advice
the bride and groom want to hear(read) something nice

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cute ending

and i like the idea too!

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Very cute!!!!!! I love it!