Does this make sense?

Invitation wording:

Mrs. Mary Ann Ruvolo and
Mr. & Mrs. Lawrence Schneider
Invite you to witness the wedding vows of their children

Annmarie Kristine
To
Gregory Michael Schneider

As they begin their joyful journey.

The Twenty-third of November
Two Thousand and Five at
Three o'clock in the afternoon

Saint Sylvester's Church
68 Ohio Avenue
Medford, NY


Reception cards:

Adult Reception & Celebration
to begin at Seven o’clock in the evening

Chateau La Mer
845 South Wellwood Avenue
Lindenhurst, NY

Response Card:
We look forward to celebrating with you!
The favor of a reply is requested by
November 2, 2005
M _________________________
__ Accept with Pleasure
__ Decline with Regret
__ Number of Persons

It sounds great. The only thing that I noticed was the and, and right after each other. I'm finnicky that way but it is probably correct.

I might say 'along with'

Mrs. Mary Ann Ruvolo and {along with}
Mr. & Mrs. Lawrence Schneider

I like how you worded everything - sounds nice

Looks good...the only thing I think I would change is make the 'To' b/w your names to 'And'.
Most of the invitations I have have seen that say 'children' as opposed to 'daughter' use 'And'.

Other than that - look great!

I think it looks great, but I don't think you need to use the groom's last name since it's the same as his parents' last name. You might do it like this:

Mrs. Mary Ann Ruvolo and
Mr. & Mrs. Lawrence Schneider
Invite you to witness the wedding vows of their children

Annmarie Kristine
And
Gregory Michael

As they begin their joyful journey.

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Posted by mrsgtobe

I think it looks great, but I don't think you need to use the groom's last name since it's the same as his parents' last name. You might do it like this:

Mrs. Mary Ann Ruvolo and
Mr. & Mrs. Lawrence Schneider
Invite you to witness the wedding vows of their children

Annmarie Kristine
And
Gregory Michael

As they begin their joyful journey.

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I was going to say the same thing!