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Does this sound right?

luvsun27 Posted:

Does this sound right?

I'm trying to pick invitation wording...and I liked a little bit from a few samples...so I'm trying to put it together. Does this sound ok?

BRIDE'S PARENTS
and
GROOM'S PARENTS
Invite you to share a day of happiness
at the marriage of their children
BRIDE
and
GROOM
As they exchange wedding vows
and begin their new life together
on DAY
YEAR
at TIME
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

Or do you like this one better?

Love was meant to be shared
with parents, family and friends
BRIDE and GROOM
have found love in each other
Because you have shared in their lives
by your friendship and love
we invite you to celebrate with us
the marriage of our children
on DAY
YEAR
at TIME
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

BRIDE'S PARENTS
GROOM'S PARENTS
Sweetness Posted:

Re: Does this sound right?

I like the first one better

soon2bmrs2004 Posted:

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I like the first

palebride Posted:

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since your parents' names are oging to be on there - why not ask them and see which they like better?

luvsun27 Posted:

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Palebride...I asked my mom...she said 'whatever you like is fine with me'. That's why I'm asking you guys!
kathleenmarie Posted:

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I cant decide!!

sp04 Posted:

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First one

palebride Posted:

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i hate when you ask someone their opinion and they say 'whatever you like'

i just know my mom got all mad when we got the invitations without checking the wording with her first......so i wanted to make sure you didn't get in trouble too!!

i think i like the first one a little better....but then again, it soudns a lot like my invitations, so i might be biased!
wenndypoo Posted:

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The first one is more traditional. But I really like the second one.

I'm not much help am I?
mirla122 Posted:

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Mine say something like your second one, but I like the 1st one better now that I see them together.

Sweetpea Posted:

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I like the 1st one.

2003OCT10 Posted:

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I like the first one!!
babybride Posted:

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I like the first one. It is very nice!

AliKing Posted:

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I like the first one

Donna Posted:

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I like the first one better

nylisa Posted:

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I love the 2nd one because that is the wording I am using for my invitations.
oakslady Posted:

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i like the second one too

BMD'sPeanut Posted:

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second one definitely. i think i will use something like that.

junebride05 Posted:

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i think the first one s/b used only if the parents are going to pay for the wedding. but if it's u and yr FH paying then the second one

May05Bride Posted:

Re: Does this sound right?

I like the first one best.

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