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Does this sound right?? Wording Help... Need ASAP!!!

2003OCT10 Posted:

Does this sound right?? Wording Help... Need ASAP!!!

We would like to thank our friends and family for sharing and celebrating our first day as Husband and Wife. The Support and Love you have shown towards us through the years is greatly appreciated. We are blessed to have you in our life.
Love, Brian and Lauren

Esited for spelling, HELP!
2003OCT10 Posted:

Re: Does this sound right?? Wording Help... Need ASAP!!!

Someone, anyone??
shelzyp Posted:

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It sounds good, but what will this be on?

btrflygrl Posted:

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I think it sounds wonderful!

fallwed03 Posted:

Re: Does this sound right?? Wording Help... Need ASAP!!!

We would like to thank our family and friends for sharing and celebrating our first day as Husband and Wife. The Support and Love you have shown us through the years is greatly appreciated. We are blessed to have you in our lives.
Love, Brian and Lauren



I made a few changes
2003OCT10 Posted:

Re: Does this sound right?? Wording Help... Need ASAP!!!

THe insert for our CD favors.... I have to print up a ton of them and I was second guessing The wording, The second sentence sounds OK???

2003OCT10 Posted:

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Ooh fallwed... That was what I was struggling with! I think yours sounds better..

Maribelle7777 Posted:

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take out the 'towards' - sounds odd with it in. Otherwise it's great!

halloweenbride04 Posted:

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PERFECT FallWed! I'd go with that.....very nice sentiment.

2003OCT10 Posted:

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Should I put our last name?

2003OCT10 Posted:

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YOU LADIES ROCK!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!!!

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