donation wording

Soon2bMrsH Posted: Aug 02, 2010 10:41 AM

donation wording

if you are doing a donation what wording are you using?

We are using a bakery that donates money to a foundation of your choice.... so we are giving something for them to take home (or eat on teh way out) and then making that donation as well as a seperate donation (cause its not much from the bakery)
a huge thank you to the girl that posted about it a while ago.... BakingForGood.com

So i was thinking something like this:

'A portion of the proceeds as well as a seperate donation have been made in your honour to the American Heart Association.'

does that sound right?? any other suggestions?

AwaitingAugust Posted: Aug 02, 2010 12:24 PM

Re: donation wording

Posted by Soon2bMrsH
'A portion of the proceeds as well as a seperate donation have been made in your honour to the American Heart Association.

sorry, i dont like that at all ... it sounds like you're saying that you're making money off of the wedding.

i had:

in lieu of a traditional favor, a donation has been made in your honor to the World Wildlife Fund. Thank you for sharing our day with us!
--Craig and Mor

HTH

rendel Posted: Aug 02, 2010 12:34 PM

Re: donation wording

Posted by Soon2bMrsH

if you are doing a donation what wording are you using?

We are using a bakery that donates money to a foundation of your choice.... so we are giving something for them to take home (or eat on teh way out) and then making that donation as well as a seperate donation (cause its not much from the bakery)
a huge thank you to the girl that posted about it a while ago.... BakingForGood.com

So i was thinking something like this:

'A portion of the proceeds as well as a seperate donation have been made in your honour to the American Heart Association.'

does that sound right?? any other suggestions? [/QUOTE
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