E-Party Invite Wording

OK so I decided to go with the invites that I love. Here is the invite:

http://www.wedding-needs.com/prods/1024.asp

If you can't see for any reason, it's a message in a bottle thing.


And this is what I was thinking of for wording:

'Because we truly care about you
on July 11th we'd love you to be
at our Engagement Party
on our 'island lost at sea'
To celebrate love, family, and friends
in the Summer weather
and to celebrate the eternal fact
that 'hope will keep [us] together'

HONEST opinions please :)

I wrote that myself and those quoted lines are from the song 'Message in a Bottle'

I love the message in a bottle idea!!!

As for the wording, good job. I wouldn't know how to start something like that.

I think that is SO cute! I love the theme and I think that is a cute invite!!!!!!

thank you!

I might change the first line only to be about how we first got together or something (we started dating on the Seaside Heights boardwalk)-- but the rest is staying

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Posted by beebs341

so so so cute, but I would change HOPE to LOVE. JMO

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Ditto I was thinking the exact same thing, very pretty!!!

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Posted by beebs341

so so so cute, but I would change HOPE to LOVE. JMO

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I thought that too- the only reason I used hope was because it's part of the song lyric, but I'm still thinking about it.

Thanks for the positive feedback girls!

I just ordered them, I'm SO EXCITED.