EDIT FOR ME PLEASE!

Mr. & Mrs. Anthony Aajdlajdlas
request the honor of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter

Haroula
to
Gianni

son of Mr. & Mrs. G Lajksdaksdk
Sunday, the twenty-fourth of October
two thousand and ten
at three o'clock in the afternoon

Church Name
Hicksville, New York

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is anything mispelled?
is anything not uppercase that should be? does everythign look gramatically correct??

a few things:
* i don't think you should have that comma after 'sunday'
* it should technically be 'two thousand ten' (no 'and') though i've seen both on invitations
* is the church address also listed on the invitation?
* how come your FH's parents' first name is just written as 'G', but your parents have 'Anthony' (is this just the way you edited it for LIW?)
* i'm not 100% sure but i think it should be 'three O'Clock' (capital C and O)


other that those tiny things, everything's good

Mine says

Two Thousand Ten

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Posted by Jna2010

i think it should be 'honour'

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same here

Whoa. I didn't think anything was wrong. I am now dreading doing this.....

I think when it's my time (meaning later this week), I'm going to check out 'her' website and take it from there....

I personally prefer 'the pleasure of your company' instead of 'the honor of your presence'...

and I have always heard that Honour v. honor is up to you. Depending on how formal you want it to be......

<-- mark 1 for NOT spelling it 'honour'

you can do what you want but babygirl, you ain't british.

JMO.

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Posted by joctorre
I personally prefer 'the pleasure of your company' instead of 'the honor of your presence'...

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from what i understand, you're supposed to use 'honor' (or 'honour') for Church/religious weddings ... 'pleasure' is used for non-religious weddings (like at the RH).

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Posted by AwaitingAugust

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Posted by joctorre
I personally prefer 'the pleasure of your company' instead of 'the honor of your presence'...

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from what i understand, you're supposed to use 'honor' (or 'honour') for Church/religious weddings ... 'pleasure' is used for non-religious weddings (like at the RH).

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hmmmm.. that makes sense. and it does sound like I've heard that before, too... Thanks for clarifyling

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Posted by AwaitingAugust

a few things:
* i don't think you should have that comma after 'sunday'
* it should technically be 'two thousand ten' (no 'and') though i've seen both on invitations
* is the church address also listed on the invitation?
* how come your FH's parents' first name is just written as 'G', but your parents have 'Anthony' (is this just the way you edited it for LIW?)
* i'm not 100% sure but i think it should be 'three O'Clock' (capital C and O)


other that those tiny things, everything's good

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Yes, church address is listed on the invitation, but I am only putting the town and the church name, not full address.

FH parents will have full names, just like mine. Wasn't about to write out their full names on here.

Thanks!

are those real last names? dang, it's so difficult to pronounce!