English teachers/proof-readers needed for my proof. Please help!
fancyface1955
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English teachers/proof-readers needed for my proof. Please help!
HI Gals,
So my invite was submitted TWICE each time returning with typo-s or details missing in the proof. I'm POSITIVE it's ok now, BUT i want to be totally sure before it goes for final printing. We allready found an error the double 'e' at the end of 'exchange', but is there anything else wrong or missing?? The invite wouldn't fit here, but it's in my album with today's date. Please take a moment and check it for me Thanks so much to all who help.
FuTuRe MrS MaZz
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i would add in some commas... but im not an english teacher so i could be wrong...
after your fh's last name there should be a comma... and then after parents there should be another comma... and possibly another one after Friday, ...
LaurenJosh
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Posted by FuTuRe MrS MaZz
i would add in some commas... but im not an english teacher so i could be wrong...
after your fh's last name there should be a comma... and then after parents there should be another comma... and possibly another one after Friday, ...
That's exactly what I was going to say.
sophisticat13
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I think there is an extra ''e' at the end of the word 'exchange'. I love the 'as the clock strikes 5' part By any chance was anyone in your family student teaching and/or a retired teacher by the way?!
IrishBrideASmiling
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My only thing is the year. I know everyone writes 'Two Thousand and Nine,' but it really should be Two Thousand Nine if you want to be grammatically correct.
JAAMS
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Ok so I'm an English freak, so here I go:
Because you have shared in our lives by your friendship and love--- I think this should really read
'Because you have shared in our lives by showing/giving your friendship and love' OR 'Because you have shared in our lives with your friendship and love'
there should be a comma after together with our parents
