I have a sign that is being displayed with hopefully a pint glass and coasters along side it. This is the sign (jpg not the printed version)
Then I have gable boxes that I have a small tag with our monogram and on the back thank you tom and jenn but I am putting a sticker on the front panel of them. Does this read okay?
hwolf812
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LOVE THEM!!! I might steal that...
KitWisdom
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I think they are GORGEOUS!
My one suggestion would be to change 'and be on your way.' I don't know why, but it just didn't sit right with me, lol. Maybe 'as you go on your way'? JMO!
Bella77
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they're beautiful! i especially love the font!
nifheim
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Posted by KitWisdom
I think they are GORGEOUS!
My one suggestion would be to change 'and be on your way.' I don't know why, but it just didn't sit right with me, lol. Maybe 'as you go on your way'? JMO!
Yea i kinda struggled with that - thanks for the suggestion !
jennandrolo
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their great! i love the saying on the first one
Mizzdimple
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Love them- my question is who the HE L L voted horrible........jerks
minibride08
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I saw these the other day while I was browsing the albums... Love them!
luna bride x
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love them! you need to make my invites and stuff lol
nifheim
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hahah hey i put it up to get a critique but if you can't leave a message on why they are horrible then makes me think they are just saying it because it is not their 'taste'.
AS
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Very nice, I like the colors
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the one thing I would change is the spacing on the last four lines so they read like....
and when you get home and raise a pint glass or two
but remember to place them on the coaster etc....
that way the two rhyming lines are easier to read...
they look amazing !!
Belongs2DanBuckley
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I FRIGGIN LOVE YOUR MONOGRAM JEN!!!
I think its awesome! I love that you did a poem and everything....
the only thing is I think 'you CHOSE to celebrate our wedding' has kind of a negative connotation...maybe just write thank you for celebrating our wedding and keep it short and sweet and ttp....idk JMO
otherwise it really looks awesome!
CNC4eva3402
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Your monogram is GORGEOUS!!!
They look beautiful!! I love it!
Mrs. V 2008
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I like those alot! goes great with your theme!
jgl
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Posted by nifheim
I am working on my labels for the OOT boxes.
I have a sign that is being displayed with hopefully a pint glass and coasters along side it. This is the sign (jpg not the printed version)
Then I have gable boxes that I have a small tag with our monogram and on the back thank you tom and jenn but I am putting a sticker on the front panel of them. Does this read okay?
they look awesome!! I might just chage the wording on
we are so glad you chose to celebrate our wedding day
maybe write.. we are so glad you were here to help us celebrate our marriage. something like that 'shose to celebrate our weddingday' doesnt flow or sound just right
