HELP!!!!! I need help writing an objective on my resume

and where else would I go?? LIW of course


I am applying for a pharmaceutical sales position.HELP PLEASE??!!!!

TIA

So far I came up with this, but it sounds bad

A sales position where my energy and eagerness will

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From what I heard, you don't put that on your resume anymore???

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Really? that would be Awesome

One thing to keep in mind is that you don't necessarily need an objective statement. Objectives used to be considered necessary and conventional for all resumes, but not anymore! (I teach business writing sometimes and this advice appears in the textbook I use.)

If you do want to include an objective, what you have so far is a fine start. The idea is to generate the reader's interest immediately and to be as specific as possible. The words 'energy' and 'eagerness' should catch the reader's eye.

You might also consider replacing the objective statement with a 'Summary of Qualifications,' especially if you have a lot of diverse training and experience.

Good luck!

thanks!

Does this sound ok?

A sales position where my energy and eagerness can assist in company growth

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Posted by JZNCK

thanks!

Does this sound ok?

A sales position where my energy and eagerness can assist in company growth

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I might say 'can contribute to company growth' instead, but I like it!