Help me choose invite wording!!

Hey ladies!! Okay sooo, originally I was doing DIY pocketfolds and posted not too long ago regarding formats and what not HOWEVER lazyness got the best of me and FH and I decided to just order invites from notfromabox.com instead.

give it up for us lazy brides.

anyway FH and I were playing around with wording and the original wording I had felt too plain to me, so we saw something else we liked in a magazine, then FH decided to combine the two and now we can't decide on what we want written. (Thank you FH )

The first is what we were originally going to go with, the second is what we saw in the magazine and the third is FH's hybrid (he was so proud of himself )

Anyway...let me know your opinion!!

Thanks

Depends on what you're going for.

Less formal? #2

More formal? #1

I picked #2...I think it sounds 'happier!'

i voted for one but i was the same way i like the wording of a invite i saw but i also wanted another one so here is waht i am doing maybe you guys will want to use something like this so i thought i share
With joyful hearts
we request the honor of your presence
at the ceremony uniting


etc ..

i'm going for honesty here....

i like number 1 - number 2 sounds like you're trying too hard to convey joy & happiness....ya know?????

i'm sorry if that came off harsh - but i think it's a little too much....

you know i adore you!!!!!!

Yea, I vote for #2 as well.
3 seems a little wordy & akward..sorry to your FH!

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Posted by davenjess

i'm going for honesty here....

i like number 1 - number 2 sounds like you're trying too hard to convey joy & happiness....ya know?????

i'm sorry if that came off harsh - but i think it's a little too much....

you know i adore you!!!!!!

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jess, i love honest answers...those are the best kind. TY

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Posted by DeeluvsVinny

Yea, I vote for #2 as well.
3 seems a little wordy & akward..sorry to your FH!

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i kind of agree lol but I didn't want to be mean. He was all like 'Look what I did!!'

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Posted by TGs Lady 22908

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Posted by davenjess

i'm going for honesty here....

i like number 1 - number 2 sounds like you're trying too hard to convey joy & happiness....ya know?????

i'm sorry if that came off harsh - but i think it's a little too much....

you know i adore you!!!!!!

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jess, i love honest answers...those are the best kind. TY

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With joyful hearts
we request the honor of your presence
at the ceremony uniting

i LOVE that though....it says the same thing but is worded better i think....

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Posted by davenjess

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Posted by TGs Lady 22908

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Posted by davenjess

i'm going for honesty here....

i like number 1 - number 2 sounds like you're trying too hard to convey joy & happiness....ya know?????

i'm sorry if that came off harsh - but i think it's a little too much....

you know i adore you!!!!!!

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jess, i love honest answers...those are the best kind. TY

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With joyful hearts
we request the honor of your presence
at the ceremony uniting

i LOVE that though....it says the same thing but is worded better i think....

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I'm using the 'Together with their parents' line....how would that go together?...because I really like it. (ty blu )

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Posted by TGs Lady 22908

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Posted by davenjess

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Posted by TGs Lady 22908

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Posted by davenjess

i'm going for honesty here....

i like number 1 - number 2 sounds like you're trying too hard to convey joy & happiness....ya know?????

i'm sorry if that came off harsh - but i think it's a little too much....

you know i adore you!!!!!!

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jess, i love honest answers...those are the best kind. TY

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With joyful hearts
we request the honor of your presence
at the ceremony uniting

i LOVE that though....it says the same thing but is worded better i think....

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I'm using the 'Together with their parents' line....how would that go together?...because I really like it. (ty blu )

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no prob!!!! myabe something like this but i dont know if it sounds right

It's with joyful hearts
that together with our Parents
we request the honor of your presence
at the ceremony uniting

if you're having the ceremony at a church, i think it's more appropriate to say 'request the honor of your presence'...that's just my opinion, but also the appropriate wording if you're following etiquette guides.