help me proof read

Hi I am a terrible at spelling and grammar. I am going to start printing my invitations and would like if you girls could proof read for me :)Thanks

Mr. and Mrs. C F
Request the honor of your presence
At the marriage of
Their daughter
D A F

To

J R L
Son of S L and C T
Saturday, the Seventeenth of October
Two thousand Nine
At half past four o’clock
West Sayville Country Club
West Sayville, New York

On a formal invitation, you usually use 'honour' instead of 'honor'.

Also, you have too many caps in the date:

Saturday, the seventeenth of October
Two thousand nine
At half past four o’clock
West Sayville Country Club
West Sayville, New York

Thank you