Help me with my Invitation Wording!

Okay, I just got the proof of my invitation, and there is one sentence that is bothering me. What do you think?

Two Lives, two hearts
joined together in friendship
united forever in love

Jennifer -----------
and
Hal---------------

together with our par ents
invite you to share
in a celebration of love,
as we exchange marriage vows
on Friday the fourteenth of May
Two thousand and four
at six-thirty in the evening
Majestic Gardens
Rocky Point, New York

Reception immediately following


Okay, it is the sentend 'in a celebration of love' that is bothering me. It just sounds like ther are too many love's in the invite. What do you think? Should I change it? Do you have any suggestions?
THANKS! g

I thought it was that part too before I finished reading. What about this:

together with our parents
invite you to share in our joy
as we exchange marriage vows

JMO but I think it was too many lines, I don't think it had anything to do with too many 'loves'


Check out www.verseit.com for ideas on the wording.

My two liner at the top says 'In the spirit of love and laughter
as our love becomes forever after. . .'

and then we also have 'we invite you to share in this celebration of love'

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Posted by btrflygrl

My two liner at the top says 'In the spirit of love and laughter
as our love becomes forever after. . .'

and then we also have 'we invite you to share in this celebration of love'

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So........ you don't think it is too many 'Loves'? Because I really like the sentence by itself, I just don't know if it flows right?

Here are some alternatives:

together with our parents
invite you to share in our joy
as we exchange marriage vows


together with our parents
invite you to share
in a celebration of heartfelt joy
as we exchange marriage vows


together with our parents
invite you to celebrate
as we exchange marriage vows


together with our parents
invite you to join the celebration
as we exchange marriage vows


together with our parents
invite you to share our new beginning
as we exchange marriage vows

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This was my fav so far:
together with our parents
invite you to share
in a celebration of heartfelt joy
as we exchange marriage vows