I've been working on these and thought I was done...even printed several. Now I'm not sure about the wording. Last line...should it be WHEN? THAT? should that word just be left out so line will start Cindy? I think it should really be ON WHICH but there's no way I'm writing that...too many syllables!!LOL
BTW In case you don't know, we got engaged in front of Cinderella's Castle in DisneyWorld!
In front of the castle, he asked her to wed. She said yes with a tear and a smile! Please save the date of the special day When Cindy and Gregg will walk down the aisle!
June 26, 2005 Formal Invitation to follow
What do you think? Thanks for your help!
azoodie
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i think it's perfect and is and adorable!! i love it
Sweetpea130000
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I agree, it is perfect and a great idea!
Mrs_B
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No reason AT ALL to have a second thought on that one... its great!!!!!
brooklynbridezilla
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Its cute just the way it is.
hmm8191
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Leave it like it is
Robinella
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Its very sweet, leave it as it
Dooodles
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Sounds great. Leave as is
angelbear217
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Relax it's great! Love the poem!
marc_rai
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It's fine.
Princess047
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It's perfect - don't change a thing!
junebride!
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Thanks so much to all of you! I feel better, knowing that you would've told me if it was not good...Well, here I go now, printing the rest of them!