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Help please! Second thoughts about STD

junebride!

Help please! Second thoughts about STD

I've been working on these and thought I was done...even printed several. Now I'm not sure about the wording. Last line...should it be WHEN? THAT? should that word just be left out so line will start Cindy? I think it should really be ON WHICH but there's no way I'm writing that...too many syllables!!LOL

BTW In case you don't know, we got engaged in front of Cinderella's Castle in DisneyWorld!

In front of the castle, he asked her to wed.
She said yes with a tear and a smile!
Please save the date of the special day
When Cindy and Gregg will walk down the aisle!

June 26, 2005
Formal Invitation to follow

What do you think? Thanks for your help!
azoodie

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

i think it's perfect and is and adorable!! i love it
Sweetpea130000

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

I agree, it is perfect and a great idea!

Mrs_B

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

No reason AT ALL to have a second thought on that one... its great!!!!!

brooklynbridezilla

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Its cute just the way it is.
hmm8191

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Leave it like it is

Robinella

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Its very sweet, leave it as it

Dooodles

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Sounds great. Leave as is

angelbear217

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Relax it's great! Love the poem!

marc_rai

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

It's fine.

Princess047

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

It's perfect - don't change a thing!

junebride!

Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Thanks so much to all of you! I feel better, knowing that you would've told me if it was not good...Well, here I go now, printing the rest of them!

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