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Help please! Second thoughts about STD
junebride! Posted: Nov 01, 2004 08:11 AM+
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Help please! Second thoughts about STD

I've been working on these and thought I was done...even printed several. Now I'm not sure about the wording. Last line...should it be WHEN? THAT? should that word just be left out so line will start Cindy? I think it should really be ON WHICH but there's no way I'm writing that...too many syllables!!LOL

BTW In case you don't know, we got engaged in front of Cinderella's Castle in DisneyWorld!

In front of the castle, he asked her to wed.
She said yes with a tear and a smile!
Please save the date of the special day
When Cindy and Gregg will walk down the aisle!

June 26, 2005
Formal Invitation to follow

What do you think? Thanks for your help!
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azoodie Posted: Nov 01, 2004 08:20 AM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

i think it's perfect and is and adorable!! i love it
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Sweetpea130000 Posted: Nov 01, 2004 08:33 AM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

I agree, it is perfect and a great idea!
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Mrs_B Posted: Nov 01, 2004 08:34 AM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

No reason AT ALL to have a second thought on that one... its great!!!!!
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brooklynbridezilla Posted: Nov 01, 2004 08:34 AM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Its cute just the way it is.
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hmm8191 Posted: Nov 01, 2004 01:21 PM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Leave it like it is
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Robinella Posted: Nov 01, 2004 07:32 PM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Its very sweet, leave it as it
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Dooodles Posted: Nov 01, 2004 07:42 PM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Sounds great. Leave as is
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angelbear217 Posted: Nov 01, 2004 07:44 PM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Relax it's great! Love the poem!
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marc_rai Posted: Nov 01, 2004 08:00 PM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

It's fine.
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Princess047 Posted: Nov 01, 2004 08:05 PM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

It's perfect - don't change a thing!
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junebride! Posted: Nov 01, 2004 10:26 PM+
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Re: Help please! Second thoughts about STD

Thanks so much to all of you! I feel better, knowing that you would've told me if it was not good...Well, here I go now, printing the rest of them!
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