help with invitation wording?
Hi ladies, I need your help please! Is the together with... supposed to say 'their' or 'our'??? I think their but not sure.... Also need your opinion!
The proof we just got reads:
Together with our families
BRIDE
and
GROOM
request the honour of your presence
as we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, the twenty-third of May
Two thousand and nine
at three o'clock in the afternoon
but I'm thinking of switching to...
Together with their families
BRIDE
and
GROOM
request the honour of your presence
as they join together
in holy matrimony
on Saturday, the twenty-third of May
Two thousand and nine
at three o'clock in the afternoon
or maybe...
Together with their families
BRIDE
and
GROOM
request the honour of your presence
as they join together in marriage
on Saturday, the twenty-third of May
Two thousand and nine
at three o'clock in the afternoon
Which do you like better, #1, #2 or #3? Is #2 too wordy? The options basically are: (1) 'exchange marriage vows', (2) 'join together in holy matrimony', or (3) 'join together in marriage'.
Let me know what you think! THANKS!!!!
The proof we just got reads:
Together with our families
BRIDE
and
GROOM
request the honour of your presence
as we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, the twenty-third of May
Two thousand and nine
at three o'clock in the afternoon
but I'm thinking of switching to...
Together with their families
BRIDE
and
GROOM
request the honour of your presence
as they join together
in holy matrimony
on Saturday, the twenty-third of May
Two thousand and nine
at three o'clock in the afternoon
or maybe...
Together with their families
BRIDE
and
GROOM
request the honour of your presence
as they join together in marriage
on Saturday, the twenty-third of May
Two thousand and nine
at three o'clock in the afternoon
Which do you like better, #1, #2 or #3? Is #2 too wordy? The options basically are: (1) 'exchange marriage vows', (2) 'join together in holy matrimony', or (3) 'join together in marriage'.
Let me know what you think! THANKS!!!!
