help with invite wording

does this look ok

Martha ____
and
John ____
Together with their parents
request the honour of your presence
as they join together in marriage
Friday, the fourth of September
Two thousand and nine (should i use and nine or just nine)
half past 6 o'clock in the evening

should i include
Adult reception immediately following
or just
Floral Terrace
Floral Park, New York

or neither

im so clueless

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Posted by lilmartha59

does this look ok

Martha ____
and
John ____
Together with their parents
request the honour of your presence
as they join together in marriage
Friday, the fourth of September
Two thousand and nine (should i use and nine or just nine)
half past 6 o'clock in the evening

should i include
Adult reception immediately following
or just
Floral Terrace
Floral Park, New York

or neither

im so clueless

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i swear i answered this...maybe you posted this in 09ers too? who knows, i was up so late yesterday! i like the spelling of honor, are you have a very formal affair? just curious (because i keep debating on spelling it that way too! i love it!) and it's two thousand and nine. also, i'd spell out six (rather than the actual #) HTH

ETA: oh and you should put the bottom this way.:

Floral Terrace
Floral Park, New York


Adult reception immediately to follow. (and this is supposed to go offset from the center, on the left side...i don't know why, a weddingplanner/DOC told me this)..but it's up to you

thanks yeah i did post this on the '09 forum and didnt even realize it