honest feedback please

soo... this is the first draft of our wedding invitations and there are a few things that i definetly wanna change, but i was looking for your help ladies...
What do you like/not like... give me all your feedback so i can pass it on to get my next draft!!!! TIA!

hope this works!

I really like it- the colors, the font and the flower. But there is something with the response card. I cant figure out what exactly though.

Edit-
Just read Jackies ans. Thats it ....the bubbles. I dont really love that- i think a line would look better

i agree with Jackie about the rsvp

what about putting your monogram on the outside of the pocketfold instead of the calla lily? Just an idea, looks nice the way it is just maybe too much calla lily since its already on the invite itself

im not a big fan of that shade of green, personally i would do more of a sage but i dont know what your colors are

I agree with the other girls about the bubbles. And I agree with Joanna about the lily on the front. A monogram would look really nice.

Pretty!

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Posted by CloudNine

i like them, i just dont like on the rsvp that it looks like a bubble they fill in to accept or decline? reminds me of a scantron test lol

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i'll definetly have her change that! Thanks, i didnt even realize that

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Posted by Jna2010

i agree with Jackie about the rsvp

what about putting your monogram on the outside of the pocketfold instead of the calla lily? Just an idea, looks nice the way it is just maybe too much calla lily since its already on the invite itself

im not a big fan of that shade of green, personally i would do more of a sage but i dont know what your colors are

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in her email back to me, she said it would be monogrammed & calla lilly's on the emblem... you think that is too much? i thought it might be cool since the calla is so simple?

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Posted by Jna2010

i agree with Jackie about the rsvp

what about putting your monogram on the outside of the pocketfold instead of the calla lily? Just an idea, looks nice the way it is just maybe too much calla lily since its already on the invite itself

im not a big fan of that shade of green, personally i would do more of a sage but i dont know what your colors are

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ITA about the calla lily, but I may be biased. I'm not a big fan of them so it might just be overload for me (whereas my invites are damask overload lol.).

It also seems a little strange to me that the writing is so off kilter. It's the the sentence is continuing on but it's completely on the other side of the page. Just a thought!

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Posted by meganbrandon

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Posted by Jna2010

i agree with Jackie about the rsvp

what about putting your monogram on the outside of the pocketfold instead of the calla lily? Just an idea, looks nice the way it is just maybe too much calla lily since its already on the invite itself

im not a big fan of that shade of green, personally i would do more of a sage but i dont know what your colors are

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in her email back to me, she said it would be monogrammed & calla lilly's on the emblem... you think that is too much? i thought it might be cool since the calla is so simple?

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personally i think i would just do my monogram on the front, but if you have the calla lilly as the background and your monogram over it i think that'd be nice too

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Posted by M_Berk-Glenn

I love them they way they are

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I agree! Very pretty!

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Posted by AngnShaun

I love the colors... if they were mine i would put some color in the lillys... make them more defined...

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yeah, i was kinda thinking that too! We're doing green as the BM color & green/yellow/ivory flowers... any recommendations for colors in the callas?

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Posted by meganbrandon

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Posted by AngnShaun

I love the colors... if they were mine i would put some color in the lillys... make them more defined...

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yeah, i was kinda thinking that too! We're doing green as the BM color & green/yellow/ivory flowers... any recommendations for colors in the callas?

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i would use the brown and green... just small lines outlining the shape... but ask the lady what she would use...