The wording is a little non-traditional/informal, but I like it. For example, for a wedding in a church, 'request the honour of your presence' is traditionally used. I do like the wording you picked.
One thing I would CONSIDER changing is the order of the date.
usually the date is written as Saturday the 19th of September (I don't remember your wedding date), half after 2 o clock in the afternoon.
I do really like the large date though. I'm not sure if there's a more clear way to write the date in a traditional way while keeping your layout.
FutureJOC
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love it!
rosatemp
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IrishAli
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Very nice!
merelynn10
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looks great!
Ellynrose
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I love it - as you are my hall twin :)
One thing as an FYI - if guests are using a GPS - you should put 100 Fox Hill Drive, CALVERTON
the GPS doesn't pick up Baiting Hollow! xo
DANAnPATRICK
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Thats my church
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Posted by Ellynrose
I love it - as you are my hall twin :)
One thing as an FYI - if guests are using a GPS - you should put 100 Fox Hill Drive, CALVERTON
the GPS doesn't pick up Baiting Hollow! xo
I know I called giorgios and the receptionist was told me to put baiting hollow/calverton but idk if I love that so I may just switch it to claverton
