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how does this sound? what is everyone else using??

BMD'sPeanut Posted:

how does this sound? what is everyone else using??

BMD'sPeanut
(daughter of BMD's Mother and Father)
and
BMD'sPeanut FH
(son of FH Mother and Father)
invite you to share in their joy as they begin their new life together

Sunday, October 24, 2004

2:45PM Nuptual Mass

Our Church
Our Street
Our State & City
kel2004 Posted:

Re: how does this sound? what is everyone else using??

That sounds good. Some people also use 'Together with their parents...'

One note: Nuptial is misspelled. 'i' instead of 'u'.

We're using:

Mr. and Mrs. My Parents
request the honor of your presence
at the Nuptial Mass uniting their daughter
My Name
to
Mr. FH
in the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony
Date
Time
Place
BMD'sPeanut Posted:

Re: how does this sound? what is everyone else using??

i like the use of the words: sacrament of holy matrimony, part...i will have to re-vamp.

kel2004 Posted:

Re: how does this sound? what is everyone else using??

Yeah, I like that too. You can definitely work it in.

How about:

BMD'sPeanut
(daughter of BMD's Mother and Father)
and
BMD'sPeanut FH
(son of FH Mother and Father)
request the honor of your presence
at the Nuptial Mass
uniting them in the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony

Date
Time
Place

julz33 Posted:

Re: how does this sound? what is everyone else using??

are you putting your parents names' in parenthesis?

CaCRmr Posted:

Re: how does this sound? what is everyone else using??

I liked those sayings but my FH didn't like 'Son OF' he thought it sounded like someone was cursing his mother out. Luckily we went a WHOLE different route but I like how you have it.
kel2004 Posted:

Re: how does this sound? what is everyone else using??


Posted by julz33

are you putting your parents names' in parenthesis?



Good question. I wouldn't use the parentheses.

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