I need help ASAP

Tell me which wording I should do. We are printing the invitations tomorrow.

I added the last one after poll so I cant edit that, just write it if you like it.
Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy of
the beginning of their new life together
as they exchange marriage vows
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening
.........

or
Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening
........

or

Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
have choosen the first day
of their new life together
as Thursday, the twenty seventh day of August
two thousand and nine
You are invited to share in their joy
as they exchange marriage vows
at 6 o'clock in the evening
.......

or
Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
have choosen Thursday,
the twenty seventh of August
two thousand and nine
as the first day
of their new life together
You are invited to share in their joy
as they exchange marriage vows
at 6 o'clock in the evening

I forgot this one
Together with their families
Christien Lynn
and Anthony John
request th epleasure of your company
as they are united in marriage
Thrusday, the twenty seventh of August
Two thousand and nine
.....

the first one and the last one

I voted for this one


Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening


but then I re-read it a bunch of times and I think it would sound a little more formal if you changed the 'when' after joy to 'as' so it would read......

Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy
as they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening



HTH

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Posted by AugustBridein09

I voted for this one


Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening


but then I re-read it a bunch of times and I think it would sound a little more formal if you changed the 'when' after joy to 'as' so it would read......

Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy
as they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening



HTH

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ITA with this change. that's exactly what i was thinking!! that's my vote too :o) HTH

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Posted by GT143EA

I picked # 2. Thats what we used but in the beginning it says Together with their families.

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My mom actually asked me to put those 2 together. I think this is what I might do.

I'm actually a fan of the forgotten one.

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Posted by mandyandbrian

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Posted by AugustBridein09

I voted for this one


Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening


but then I re-read it a bunch of times and I think it would sound a little more formal if you changed the 'when' after joy to 'as' so it would read......

Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy
as they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening



HTH

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ITA with this change. that's exactly what i was thinking!! that's my vote too :o) HTH

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My vote as well.

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Posted by MLAngelo

I like the last one but i am a traditionalist.

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Me too

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Posted by MLAngelo

I like the last one but i am a traditionalist.

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SAme here