I need help ASAP

Tell me which wording I should do. We are printing the invitations tomorrow.

I added the last one after poll so I cant edit that, just write it if you like it.
Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy of
the beginning of their new life together
as they exchange marriage vows
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening
.........

or
Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Thursday August twenty seventh
Two thousand and nine
at 6 o'clock in the evening
........

or

Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
have choosen the first day
of their new life together
as Thursday, the twenty seventh day of August
two thousand and nine
You are invited to share in their joy
as they exchange marriage vows
at 6 o'clock in the evening
.......

or
Christine Lynn M...
and
Anthony John T...
have choosen Thursday,
the twenty seventh of August
two thousand and nine
as the first day
of their new life together
You are invited to share in their joy
as they exchange marriage vows
at 6 o'clock in the evening

I forgot this one
Together with their families
Christien Lynn
and Anthony John
request th epleasure of your company
as they are united in marriage
Thrusday, the twenty seventh of August
Two thousand and nine
.....