i need help w/ favor card wording....

these will be attached toboxes witha chistmas ornament inside - the ornament is a glass ball with a personalized ribbon tied and then the edges glued down on (ok, sounds uglier than it is !)

i 'borrowed' the donation version from on here b/c it was awesome!! (also note that each card will ave a lung cancer pin ribbon attached to it too)


here's what we re-worded it to be...i don't know if i love it though - can anyone help??? (thanks in advance!)
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With much thought and consideration, we have chosen a special way,
To say 'Thank You' for sharing our wedding day,
In lieu of a traditional wedding favor, we are giving you all two,
Please hang the enclosed on your tree every year and smile as you do,
Since November is Lung Cancer Awareness Month, please wear this pin to support research being done,
It represents a donation to ALCASE, the Alliance for Lung Cancer: Advocacy, Support and Education.
We feel the finest gift is one which helps cure something that has touched our lives of late,
We want to again thank you for all the support, love and kindess we’ve received - it sure has been great!

All Our Love,
Deirdre and Michael
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That is great! Just perfect..... My father passed away 2 years ago from lung cancer so i am a big fan of those who donate towards the cause for a cure.....

Hugs for both of us then




P.S. the wording is perfect. I would be proud and touched to recieve it

thanks...lol...if people leave them, i'll gladly ship one to you too then!! , if you need anything, feel free to fm me - i know how hard it can be to plan after losing someone!!

the wording you have is perfect. the favor is such a wonderful idea.

thanks everyone!!

jodi, its an organization called ALCASE based in Wa state - i have known of them for a while - they are nice...if you call them or email them with a request, they'll send you one as well!