i'm starting to think you girls don't like me...

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Posted by luvmyhuny

I'm sorry I think you should send it out with the invite with a card from the hotel thats giving you the best discounted rate.
Sorry I didnt respond sooner

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i've already explained why i can't do this.

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Posted by curliegirl

ok, here are my suggestions...I made some changes

1- you need to put addresses and phone numbers as well as web addresses.

2- you don't need to put a whole sentence, just write the price and the night minimum.

3-at the end you should put area attractions, maybe a calendar of the events going on that weekend if any, and inexpensive to moderately priced restaurants.

4-I rearranged a little below...

Ali B & Steve S – October 7, 2006
Accommodations


Shepards Beach Motel
Address
(631) 668-6700
$140 per night
www.shepardsneckinn.com/motel.htm

Royal Atlantic Beach Resorts
Address
(631) 668-5103
$105 per night
3 night minimum stay requirement (includes complimentary complete breakfast). www.royalatlantic.com

Atlantic Terrace Motel
Address
(631) 668-2050
$125 per night
2 night minimum stay requirement. . www.atlanticterrace.com

Gurney’s Inn
Address
(631) 668-2345
Rates starting at $263 per night
2 night minimum stay requirement.
www.gurneys-inn.com

***If you choose to stay at either of these motels, please be sure to make your reservations by May 10th at the latest. Montauk is a very popular place during the summer season and motel rooms tend to book up months in advance.***

Aren't you getting married in October? Then why are you requiring a reservation before May 10? Your guests will be confused when you talk about the summer months.

These should have gone out with the STDs and a stipulation put that reservations cannot be made until a certain date. However, if you already sent them out and reservations really do need to be made ASAP, then send them out newsletter-style with the other attractions on it as well.

cjb88 makes newsletters, maybe she can help you.....

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I was confused...i thought you were getting married in May....but I like this idea.

THANKS cirliegirl for your suggestions! You definitely cleaned it up a bit better!

Hi - I have no advice, BUT I wanted to tell you I always read your posts but I usually have no good advice on what you're asking (like this time as well...) so I usually don't reply... This time I STILL have no advice but wanted to tell you I love your avatar

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Posted by kittythestray

Hi - I have no advice, BUT I wanted to tell you I always read your posts but I usually have no good advice on what you're asking (like this time as well...) so I usually don't reply... This time I STILL have no advice but wanted to tell you I love your avatar

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Well thank you. And thank you for letting me know that you have no advice!! I Love it!

I have created a 'news letter for you' hopefully i can figure out how to attach it???/ Good luck if you need more info FM me! Good Luck

ok 3rd time is a charm it's really long so if you want give me your e-mail and i will EM it to u


Dear Friends & Family-
Since our Wedding falls on a busy holiday weekend we wanted to give you some things to do for your stay…..First we “reserved” rooms at:
Shepards Beach Motel
Address
(631) 668-6700
$140 per night
www.shepardsneckinn.com/motel.htm

Royal Atlantic Beach Resorts
Address
(631) 668-5103
$105 per night
3 night minimum stay requirement (includes complimentary complete breakfast). www.royalatlantic.com

Atlantic Terrace Motel
Address
(631) 668-2050
$125 per night
2 night minimum stay requirement
www.atlanticterrace.com

Gurney’s Inn
Address
(631) 668-2345
Rates starting at $263 per night
2 night minimum stay requirement.
www.gurneys-inn.com
Second we wanted to let you know that this is a great time of year to go wine tasting…..Here are some of the local Vineyards:
1. abc
2. def
3. ghi

If it’s the out doors you like this is the perfect time to get some long island pumpkins and apples……( include info here)

If you Like to shop…maybe pick up a last minute wedding gift check out the Riverhead outlets (put info here)

Finally……..This is were you will close with something like ' we look foward to seeing you on month/day/year'
PS
Please feel free to contact us at ___________should you need more information! ( i would put an e-mail address or ask your parents to put their number down!!! hopefully this helps
G-