Invitation wording

SReidy Posted: Jan 06, 2004 10:23 AM

Invitation wording

Can you please let me know how this sounds? We want to order our invitations this weekend but I keep having this fear we're going to order them and realize we did something wrong!! Are the wording and punctuation ok??? Thanks!

Together with our parents
Mr. & Mrs. James F. R______
and
Mr. & Mrs. Albert L. M______
we,
Shannon Marie
and
Gregory Albert
invite you to share in the joy
of the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, the fifteenth day of May
Two Thousand and Four
at three o'clock in the afternoon.
Mary Immaculate Church
16 Brown's Lane
Bellport, New York

SReidy Posted: Jan 06, 2004 11:38 AM

Re: Invitation wording

CAN SOMEONE PLEASE ANSWER ME IF THIS LOOKS OK??? tHANKS!!!!

patti08 Posted: Jan 06, 2004 11:40 AM

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I think you need to capitalize Fifteenth

Jordan Posted: Jan 06, 2004 11:41 AM

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I think it looks fine.

SReidy Posted: Jan 06, 2004 11:45 AM

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Thanks- Really? I wouldn't have thought to capitalize Fifteenth.

May2004 Posted: Jan 06, 2004 11:56 AM

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no you don't have to capitalize fifteenth - I didn't.

SReidy Posted: Jan 06, 2004 12:02 PM

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Ok- I hadn't thought to either but I thought I was missing something. Thanks ladies!! I appreciate it.

Smolokoff Posted: Jan 06, 2004 07:58 PM

Re: Invitation wording

Whoever you order from should be able to tell you if your punctuation, capitalization and stuff is right. As long as you include all names that should be there, and time and date and place, you are fine. I like the way you have worded it, actually. It was one of our choices, too.