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Invitation Wording

DGoldfarb0776 Posted:

Invitation Wording

Hi ladies I'm sorry I haven't been on in a while and posting but work and life have been keeping me busy. I 'm going to try and get on more often now that I am slowing things down. I also missed you all so very much. When FH is around he distracts me from LIW.. lol

I started to look for invites and I found one that I like (see pics below). I just need to make sure that the wording isn't funny or anything. I blotted out the names and such for obvious reasons..lol



Danielle ------- & Gary ----------
together with their families
invite you to share in the joy
and celebration of their marriage

Sunday, the ninth day of March
two thousand and eight
eleven thirty in the morning

Russo's On The Bay
Tivoli Room
162-45 Cross Bay Boulevard
Howard Beach, New York

Reception Immediately Following Ceremony
mac123 Posted:

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Sounds great to me
Snowflake08 Posted:

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the wording is fine, however, if you want people to come to the ceremony, then dont put on 'reception immediately following' because then people dont come to the ceremony or show up at the time you've indicated on the invite

i was going to do that also, but someone informed me not to
DGoldfarb0776 Posted:

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Only reason why I was concidering doing that line was because the ceremony is only 30 minutes long...lol

Snowflake08 Posted:

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Posted by DGoldfarb0776

Only reason why I was concidering doing that line was because the ceremony is only 30 minutes long...lol


me too, i put 7pm on my invite - ceremony is at 730 and i normally wouldnt do that but FH's family is ALWAYS late
DGoldfarb0776 Posted:

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That was a concern of mine I wanted to put 11am not 11:30am (the ceremony starts at 11:30am). I am worried that people will be late.

FFIL and FMIL insist on putting 11:30am on the invitation.
Snowflake08 Posted:

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did you order them yet?
DGoldfarb0776 Posted:

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Not yet we're going back this week to make sure that the one in the photo is the one that I want...lol I definitley want to deal with Just Announce It! in Oceanside.. Nicole and Danielle have been so helpful.

I think if I look through a few more books I'll be sure...lol
Snowflake08 Posted:

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JMO, but i would either make it 11 on the invite, or not put 'reception immediately following' otherwise a lot of people will come at 12

DGoldfarb0776 Posted:

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I know I was thinking just that (or that they'll come just as we're ready to start)..gonna have to fight my in-laws on that one.

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