Invitation wording

Ok i dont want the invite to be about who paid for what or any of that. It's about our wedding and us getting married, so i dont want an invite that specifically points out or shows to anybody like a particular person is hosting. Its us and our families who have helped and been there for us so much.

So, what do you think of this wording, is this good for what i am looking for? Not sure if ill put the quote after our names or what quote ill use, more importantly just the wording used with everyones names and the way we are inviting people. obviously this is just a sample so not our names. Opinions, suggestions or whatever you want to say lol

Mr. and Mrs.. Rick White
and
Mr. and Mrs. Tim Burrough
request the honour of your
presence at the marriage of
their children
Sharon Lynn Nicco
and
Todd Michael Reynolds
as they happily unite their
hearts their lives and their
cultures through marriage on
Saturday, the twenty-seventh
of November
Two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
The Cross Community Church
Honol

looks good to me

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Posted by soon2bmrsconnolly

looks good to me

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thank you so far this seems to be my favorite

There are 4 different last names shown

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Posted by Celest

That seems perfect. I'm leaving the names off the invite this time around personally (because by now everyone received the engagement announcement, the save the dates & etc.). I haven't rules it out completely but my mom actually prefers we have 'Together with their parents' odd as that may be?

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Yeah many of the wording i saw for what im looking for said that, it sounds good to me not odd at all. I am doing it bc for shower was my mom for RD it will be FH's parents and so this way they both are on it now

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Posted by PreshusSmurf

There are 4 different last names shown

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HAHAH that is weird, i didnt even notice that. Could it possibly be that for bride and groom its the first, middle, and maybe confirmation name or something lol. Ill definitely make sure not to do that infact i think for our names we'll just use the first names since our parents names are above

i love the text. i think it should be laid out a little differently so it flows a little better, other wise it's great

Mr. and Mrs. Rick White
and
Mr. and Mrs. Tim Burrough
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their children
Sharon Lynn Nicco
and
Todd Michael Reynolds
as they happily unite
their hearts, their lives and
their cultures through marriage on
Saturday, the twenty-seventh of November
Two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
The Cross Community Church
Honol

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Posted by BklynBride2Be

i love the text. i think it should be laid out a little differently so it flows a little better, other wise it's great

Mr. and Mrs. Rick White
and
Mr. and Mrs. Tim Burrough
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their children
Sharon Lynn Nicco
and
Todd Michael Reynolds
as they happily unite
their hearts, their lives and
their cultures through marriage on
Saturday, the twenty-seventh of November
Two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
The Cross Community Church
Honol

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yeah i just copied and pasted from a site, but i also thought each line ended to early. Thank you

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Posted by jennandrolo

sounds great to me!

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thank you...actually now im liking the quote the more i read it. I like the culture thing since we're both different nationalities and religion

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Posted by Espo22

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Posted by jennandrolo

sounds great to me!

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thank you...actually now im liking the quote the more i read it. I like the culture thing since we're both different nationalities and religion

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ive never seen that wording before and i really like it. its very unique and mentioning the mixing of cultures is something thats apart fo your lives.

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Posted by mrspalomino148

thats soo pretty! I like it.. and I think its best to do parents on top like that, this way everyone is included

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yeah i mean people will know its our wedding so let the parents go first

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Posted by jennandrolo

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Posted by Espo22

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Posted by jennandrolo

sounds great to me!

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thank you...actually now im liking the quote the more i read it. I like the culture thing since we're both different nationalities and religion

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ive never seen that wording before and i really like it. its very unique and mentioning the mixing of cultures is something thats apart fo your lives.

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yeah very true, thank you so much

AND TO ALL YOU LADIES, thanks for the help. This was so easy. I looked on 3 sites quickly saw this one and liked it right away, read all the others and stuck with this so took about 10 mins if that WOW nice and easy lol. Thanks for you opinions because made me realize it is fine and dont need to keep looking and stressing it, so thank you for letting me keep my sanity with this one thing

goodnight

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Posted by Espo22

Ok i dont want the invite to be about who paid for what or any of that. It's about our wedding and us getting married, so i dont want an invite that specifically points out or shows to anybody like a particular person is hosting. Its us and our families who have helped and been there for us so much.

So, what do you think of this wording, is this good for what i am looking for? Not sure if ill put the quote after our names or what quote ill use, more importantly just the wording used with everyones names and the way we are inviting people. obviously this is just a sample so not our names. Opinions, suggestions or whatever you want to say lol

Mr. and Mrs.. Rick White
and
Mr. and Mrs. Tim Burrough
request the honour of your
presence at the marriage of
their children
Sharon Lynn Nicco
and
Todd Michael Reynolds
as they happily unite their
hearts their lives and their
cultures through marriage on
Saturday, the twenty-seventh
of November
Two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
The Cross Community Church
Honol

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Looks good..just don't forget the comma:

their hearts, their lives and their cultures,

I also did not want it to be about who paid for what...so we went with:

Marisa so and so
and
Thomas so and so
together with their parents
request the honour of your presence
as they unite in the ceremony of marriage
etc, etc, etc

HTH

Some tweaks.

1. Use full first names for fathers. I assume they are Richard and Timothy, but use whatever the correct name is.

2. Some layout and capitalization.

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Mr. and Mrs. Richard White
and
Mr. and Mrs. Timothy Burrough

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their hearts, their lives, and their cultures
through marriage
Saturday, the twenty-seventh of November
two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
Cross Community Church
City, State (spell out state)

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Posted by MrsDtoBe

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Posted by Espo22

Ok i dont want the invite to be about who paid for what or any of that. It's about our wedding and us getting married, so i dont want an invite that specifically points out or shows to anybody like a particular person is hosting. Its us and our families who have helped and been there for us so much.

So, what do you think of this wording, is this good for what i am looking for? Not sure if ill put the quote after our names or what quote ill use, more importantly just the wording used with everyones names and the way we are inviting people. obviously this is just a sample so not our names. Opinions, suggestions or whatever you want to say lol

Mr. and Mrs.. Rick White
and
Mr. and Mrs. Tim Burrough
request the honour of your
presence at the marriage of
their children
Sharon Lynn Nicco
and
Todd Michael Reynolds
as they happily unite their
hearts their lives and their
cultures through marriage on
Saturday, the twenty-seventh
of November
Two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
The Cross Community Church
Honol

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Looks good..just don't forget the comma:

their hearts, their lives and their cultures,

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i just copied and pasted from the site so it is their fault