Invitation wording

can anyone tell me what is incorrect on my invite wording? I am going to ATTEMPT to do them myself =) TIA

Together with their families
Maeghan
and
Keith
invite you to share with them
the joy of their marriage
on Saturday, the twenty sixth day of June
Two thousand and Ten
at five o’clock in the evening
The Waterside Pavilion at the Snapper Inn
500 Shore Drive
Oakdale, New York

Where is the ceremony, and where is the reception??

If they are both at the same location, you could always put 'reception to follow' at the end of the invite, under the location.

Looks good, minor things to consider:

I would put a comma after the word families in the first line

you can also use 'in' instead of 'with them'

'day' is optional; you could also just leave it as 'the twenty sixth of June'

Also, do you want your middle names too, or just first? I think adding the middle name gives an air of formality that I like!

There are websites that cant help you with the wording, if you are looking for help, or for a different idea. :)

Just Google 'wedding invitation wording'.

Thank you! We are actually using our middle and last name's I just took them out for this... We decided today, we are going to get married at the RH site, so then I will just add 'reception to immediatley follow'

Also, is families spelt famAlies or families? I've seen it both ways and I'm not 100% sure on what exactly to do?

TIA