Invitation wording

How does this sound...

IN CELEBRATION OF LOVE…
MR. CHRISTOPHER
& MS FRANCES
REQUEST THE HONOUR OF YOUR PRESENCE
AT THE MARRIAGE OF THEIR DAUGHTER

JILLIAN SUZANNE
TO
NICHOLAS ALLEN


SATURDAY, THE TWENTY FIRST OF MAY
AT HALF PAST TWO

ST. RAYMOND’S PENYAFORT CHURCH
263 ATLANTIC AVE
EAST ROCKAWAY, NEW YORK 11518


Should I change anything
TIA

two minor things:
-- in your dad's name, you put a dot after 'Mr', but in the 'Ms' for your mom, you didn't
-- you don't generally include punctuation in the invitation text (no comma after 'saturday')

also, i'm not sure if you want to include 'IN THE AFTERNOON' or something like that ... just in case (people are dumb)

looks good otherwise