Invitation wording

Can someone who had a Catholic nuptial Mass please let me know how you worded your invitation?

I think mine will look like

Mr. -------------
requests the honour of your presence
at the Nuptial Mass of his daughter
Mary ---------
to C-----------
son of Mr. ----------
Friday, April xx, 2004
at x o'clock in the afternoon
St. ---------- Church
City, State

But I would like to see how others worded theirs before I decide on this one. Plus, FH thinks his dad should also request the honor of our guests presence. I say no, he isn't helping to pay. So maybe we can come to a happy middle.

Thanks in advance!
Mary

Ours Says:

Because you have shared in our lives by your friendship and love, we

Jaime XXXXXX

&

Michael XXXXX

together with our parents
invite you to share
the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday the seventh of february
two thousand and four
at three o' clock in the afternoon
XXX XXXX Church
123 happy street
hicksville, new york


We didn't wan to do the traditional one with parents names on top because my parents are divorced and would have fought over whose name goes first. But I actually like this one better because it is a pretty saying and it includes all our parents.