Invitation wording -- Any more feedback

(for a not so formal afternoon ceremony, FH liked an example in a magazine that did not use the bride and grroms last names, what do you think)

Two lives, two hearts
joined together in friendship
united forever in love.
It is with joy that we,
Marcia and David
Together with our parents
invite you to share
in a celebration of love
as we exchange our marriage vows
on Saturday, the first of November
two thousand and three
at half after eleven o'clock in the morning
Aboard the boat
boarding location

Reception Cruise to depart immediately following ceremony

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What do you think???

oops edited due to incorrect date, moved in up a month and freaked FH when I showed him the draft

How about the way we capitalize the 'T' in, Together with our parents

From all the samples that is how I have seen it, but does it look weird?

Thanks!

FH will be finalizing prior to printing very soon, since we are making the invites ourselves.

Any more feedback.

Thanks girls!!!