Invitation Wording - Does this sound OK?

Ms. Pauline ______ & Mr. James ________
and
Mr. & Mrs. Michael ____________
request the honour of your presence
as their children

Michelle Elena
and
Michael Patrick

share in the Sacrament of Matrimony
A Wedding Mass will celebrate this union
on Saturday, the third of November
two thousand and seven
at half past two in the afternoon

St. Sebastian’s Church
58-02 Roosevelt Avenue
Woodside, New York


*** My parents are divorced so they have different last names ***

I have to tell you that it sounds like the names up top are your and his parents not both set of your parents. I would say
Ms. Pauline ______ & Mr. James ________
and
Mr. & Mrs. Michael ____________
request the honour of your presence
as their daughter
....


does that make sense?

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Posted by GabrielleandJohn

I have to tell you that it sounds like the names up top are your and his parents not both set of your parents. I would say
Ms. Pauline ______ & Mr. James ________
and
Mr. & Mrs. Michael ____________
request the honour of your presence
as their daughter
....


does that make sense?

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Hmm...I didnt get that...

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Posted by GabrielleandJohn

I have to tell you that it sounds like the names up top are your and his parents not both set of your parents. I would say
Ms. Pauline ______ & Mr. James ________
and
Mr. & Mrs. Michael ____________
request the honour of your presence
as their daughter
....


does that make sense?

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Pauline & Jim are my parents and Mr. & Mrs. Michael are his parents so I can't word it 'as their daughter'....we want both of our parents names at top but it's so wordy since my parents are divorced and have different last names.

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Posted by chellynyc

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Posted by GabrielleandJohn

I have to tell you that it sounds like the names up top are your and his parents not both set of your parents. I would say
Ms. Pauline ______ & Mr. James ________
and
Mr. & Mrs. Michael ____________
request the honour of your presence
as their daughter
....


does that make sense?

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Pauline & Jim are my parents and Mr. & Mrs. Michael are his parents so I can't word it 'as their daughter'....we want both of our parents names at top but it's so wordy since my parents are divorced and have different last names.

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Thats exactly what I was thinking..

Ms. Pauline ______ & Mr. James ________
and
Mr. & Mrs. Michael ____________
request the honour of your presence
at the ceremony uniting their children

Michelle Elena
and
Michael Patrick

in the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony

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Posted by PreshusSmurf

Ms. Pauline ______ & Mr. James ________
and
Mr. & Mrs. Michael ____________
request the honour of your presence
at the ceremony uniting their children

Michelle Elena
and
Michael Patrick

in the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony

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I agree with this one