I think this is the wording we are doing. What are your honest opionons. I definitly want to put the our parents names in the invitations even thought we are paying ourselves. My parents are divorced and are comming alone to the wedding so this is what i thought of.
Today I will Marry My Best Friend The one I laugh with, Live for, Love Karen Daughter of Mrs. jane Doe and Mr. Joe Doe & John Son Of Mr. and Mrs. R Smith Hope that you will join us in this celebration
Thanks,
KellyS15
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I think it is just fine!
LB and DC
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that wording is perfect - my friends used the same thing on their invites and i loved it! it's a classy way of saying that you are the ones hosting the reception, and you get to honor your parents as well by mentioning them. definitely use that wording!!
bellaro782
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That sounds perfect,, Such a nice verse
MrsQ-in2007
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Phrasing sounds great, but there are some grammatical things... I recommend:
Today I will marry my best friend The one I laugh with, live for, love Karen Daughter of Mrs. jane Doe and Mr. Joe Doe & John Son of Mr. and Mrs. R Smith Hope that you will join us in this celebration
PapayaChic
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you went from third person to first
shouldnt it say hope that you will join THEM not US
or if you want to keep it with Us
before your names put WE,
malagian
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Posted by MrsQ-in2007
Phrasing sounds great, but there are some grammatical things... I recommend:
Today I will marry my best friend The one I laugh with, live for, love Karen Daughter of Mrs. jane Doe and Mr. Joe Doe & John Son of Mr. and Mrs. R Smith Hope that you will join us in this celebration
I love your idea of putting the son of and daughter of on the same line as the parents, the only problem is my last name is really long so im not sure if it will fit. But i will definitly keep it in mind. thanks,
