invite wording help

im doing my invites...can you guys make sure everything is 'ok'

Together with their parents,
Martha ____
and
John ____
request the honour of your presence
as they join together in marriage
Friday, the fourth of September
Two thousand and nine
at half past six o'clock in the evening

Floral Terrace
Floral Park, New York

Adult reception to immediately follow.


should i include
Adult reception immediately following
or just
Floral Terrace
Floral Park, New York

or neither

im so clueless

This is how I would word it:

Together with their parents,
Martha ____
and
John ____
request the honour of your presence
as they join together in marriage
Friday, the fourth of September
Two thousand and nine
at half past 6 o'clock in the evening

Floral Terrace
Floral Park, New York

Adult reception to immediately follow.

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Posted by coldasice217

This is how I would word it:

Together with their parents,
Martha ____
and
John ____
request the honour of your presence
as they join together in marriage
Friday, the fourth of September
Two thousand and nine
at half past 6 o'clock in the evening

Floral Terrace
Floral Park, New York

Adult reception to immediately follow.

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I agree!!

This is how we worded ours:

Grace
and
Christopher
Together with their families
invite you to share in their love, friendship,
and marriage
on Friday, August twenty-first at four o’clock in the afternoon
St. John the Evangelist Roman Catholic Church
Center Moriches, New York

Reception Dinner to Follow
at seven o'clock
Sunset Harbour

HTH!

Together with their parents,
Martha ____
and
John ____
request the honour of your presence (i like this spelling of honour!
as they join together in marriage
Friday, the fourth of September
Two thousand and nine
at half past 6 o'clock in the evening (and the 'at')...

Floral Terrace
Floral Park, New York

Adult reception to immediately follow.

HTH!

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Posted by coldasice217

This is how I would word it:

Together with their parents,
Martha ____
and
John ____
request the honour of your presence
as they join together in marriage
Friday, the fourth of September
Two thousand and nine
at half past 6 o'clock in the evening

Floral Terrace
Floral Park, New York

Adult reception to immediately follow.

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i agree

I personally would change the 6 o'clock to

six o'clock

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Posted by sharvin09

I personally would change the 6 o'clock to

six o'clock

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yea i agree

thanks ladies