Invite wording ideas....Edited with proof!

rdubs Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:56 AM

Invite wording ideas....Edited with proof!

Here is my proof! Its in B&W because they don't do color proofs....I love the colors, etc. that I'm getting so not changing that.

I AM changing the 'and' to a '&' script....other than that, can you help me find alternatives to:

Request the pleasure of your company
as the exchange vows

I don't like the way it looks the proof...

TIA!

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AwaitingAugust Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:59 AM

Re: Invite wording ideas....

how about:

invite you to share in the joy
of their marriage

or

invite you to share
the beginning of our new life
together when we
exchange marriage vows

?

Lsorrent Posted: Feb 05, 2010 11:20 AM

Re: Invite wording ideas....

'Request the pleasure of your company as they unite in marriage....'

'The pleasure of your company is requested at the marriage of....'

'invite you to be with us as we celebrate our new
life together....'

'Request the pleasure of your company at the ceremony uniting...'