Do I need to change anything?? Should I put formal reception to follow or is that implied since it's a Saturday night wedding?
Joseph Txxxxxxx and Nancy Wxxxxxx Together with Konstantinos and Ioanna Hxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Request the honour of your presence At the marriage of their children
Rebecca & Stephen
Saturday, the thirtieth of October Two thousand and ten At three o’clock in the afternoon Greek Orthodox Church of the Holy Resurrection Brookville, NY
Reception to Follow
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Joseph Txxxxxx and Nancy Wxxxxxx Request the honour of your presence At the marriage of their Daughter
Rebecca to Stephen Hxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Son of Konstantinos and Ioanna Hxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Saturday, the thirtieth of October Two thousand and ten At three o’clock in the afternoon Greek Orthodox Church of the Holy Resurrection Brookville, NY
Reception to Follow
SoontobeMrs.Brown
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Looks good to me
heathery72
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I think it looks good. I wouldn't add formal in.
jhines4684
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I think the second one* is good....I would just put the RH name and address underneath...I just came up with this for mine:
Together With Their Families,
Jessica
And
Derek
Invite You to Share in the Celebration of Lifelong Love And Commitment at the Ceremony Uniting Them in Marriage
Saturday, November Twentieth, Two-Thousand Ten At a Eleven Thirty in the Morning
St. Joseph’s R.C. Church 59 Church Street, Kings Park, New York
Reception Immediately to Follow
The Historical Thatched Cottage 445 East Main Street Centerport, New York
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I like the second way better. But it sounds good to me!
GiannisWifey
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I just like the second way better - more traditional to me and thats how mine is!!
wouldn't add the formal thingy!
ETA: I also think it depends on who is paying....I know some people want whoever paid to do the hosting......like if both parents paid, his parents might want to be listed first also, in which case you go with #1.............
etc
ETAA: Also, I personally don't think the reception address is necesary since that will be on your reception card insert thing.....if you aren't having a reception card insert, then add it to the invite.........its not necessary to put it on the invitation if there is one
GiannisWifey
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oh and shouldn't it have Mr. and Mrs. or Ms. or whatever also for the parent's names?
jackieee
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i like the second..that is how we worded it
Gerbera
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Are you having a formal reception? If you are then I would add that in if you're hoping people will be a little dressier.
If it's more formal I would go with option 2 if not I like option 1 better.
And def add the reception location!
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Posted by GiannisWifey
oh and shouldn't it have Mr. and Mrs. or Ms. or whatever also for the parent's names?
Yeah true, lemme revise that. Thanks!!!
GiannisWifey
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updated my post
Future Mrs H
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I like the 2nd one the best
Becca2010
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Posted by Becca2010
Posted by GiannisWifey
oh and shouldn't it have Mr. and Mrs. or Ms. or whatever also for the parent's names?
Yeah true, lemme revise that. Thanks!!!
Oh I forgot... I think my parents said this was unnecessary for them. My Dad is technically a Doc (of sociology), so originally I Had Dr. Joseph Txxxxxxxx and Ms. Nancy Wxxxxxxx and they both said it was unnecessary.
I'll discuss with Steph again, but we might leave it out.
Becca2010
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updated my post
Got it! Thanks!
GiannisWifey
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one more thing, sorry im annoying, I know what a pain invites can be.......
in the second, you put steph Hxxxxxxxxxx with son of lajdslakd and askjdaljds Hxxxxxxx
if his parents are included after as Son of Mr and Mrs. _______ then you don't have to put Steph Hxxxxxxxx
Becca2010
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Posted by GiannisWifey
one more thing, sorry im annoying, I know what a pain invites can be.......
in the second, you put steph Hxxxxxxxxxx with son of lajdslakd and askjdaljds Hxxxxxxx
if his parents are included after as Son of Mr and Mrs. _______ then you don't have to put Steph Hxxxxxxxx
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Thank you!! I thought it looked funny and I was wondering about that.
You're awesome.
SoonToBeMrsCampos
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2 things #1- the first makes it seem like both fams are hosting and the 2nd makes it seem like ur fam is hosting
#2- two thousand ten looks better to me than two thousand and ten
Otherwise, looks good!
GR2010
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I think the second one is for if your parents are paying.
I like the first one better... unless your parents are paying then numero dos
mrsdraskin2009
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I like wording #1
runnerbride1023
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You have too many capitalized letters. you're not supposed to capitalize just because it is the start of a new line. Only proper nouns.
