Do I need to change anything?? Should I put formal reception to follow or is that implied since it's a Saturday night wedding?
Joseph Txxxxxxx and Nancy Wxxxxxx Together with Konstantinos and Ioanna Hxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Request the honour of your presence At the marriage of their children
Rebecca & Stephen
Saturday, the thirtieth of October Two thousand and ten At three o’clock in the afternoon Greek Orthodox Church of the Holy Resurrection Brookville, NY
Reception to Follow
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Joseph Txxxxxx and Nancy Wxxxxxx Request the honour of your presence At the marriage of their Daughter
Rebecca to Stephen Hxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Son of Konstantinos and Ioanna Hxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Saturday, the thirtieth of October Two thousand and ten At three o’clock in the afternoon Greek Orthodox Church of the Holy Resurrection Brookville, NY
Reception to Follow
mariedsgn
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I like 2 but I would put
Mr. Joseph Txxxxxx and Mrs. Nancy Wxxxxxx
Becca2010
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Posted by RAK220
You have too many capitalized letters. you're not supposed to capitalize just because it is the start of a new line. Only proper nouns.
That only words that are capitalized that typically wouldn't be are 'Daughter,' the name of the church and 'Follow' in Reception to Follow.
ETA: and 'Together' in the first set of wording.
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Posted by RAK220
You have too many capitalized letters. you're not supposed to capitalize just because it is the start of a new line. Only proper nouns.
That only words that are capitalized that typically wouldn't be are 'Daughter,' the name of the church and 'Follow' in Reception to Follow.
ETA: and 'Together' in the first set of wording.
ETAA: I wanted to keep the first words of each line capitalized also. I know it's not grammatically correct, but it looks more formal to me.
2010BTB
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Is it supposed to be for the parents name Mr. & Mrs. John Smith or John and Jane Smith?
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Posted by Becca2010
Posted by RAK220
You have too many capitalized letters. you're not supposed to capitalize just because it is the start of a new line. Only proper nouns.
That only words that are capitalized that typically wouldn't be are 'Daughter,' the name of the church and 'Follow' in Reception to Follow.
ETA: and 'Together' in the first set of wording.
Oh ok, it looked like you had Request and At capitalized also. When I wrote up my invitations Icapitalized everything and then the invitation store told me i was wrong and fixed it.
ETA - just saw your other comment. NVM!
Becca2010
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Posted by Becca2010
Posted by RAK220
You have too many capitalized letters. you're not supposed to capitalize just because it is the start of a new line. Only proper nouns.
That only words that are capitalized that typically wouldn't be are 'Daughter,' the name of the church and 'Follow' in Reception to Follow.
ETA: and 'Together' in the first set of wording.
Oh ok, it looked like you had Request and At capitalized also. When I wrote up my invitations Icapitalized everything and then the invitation store told me i was wrong and fixed it.
