Invite Wording PLEASE

Can I get a few opinions please?
Does this sound ok?

Together with their parents

Jill Smith

and

Jack Miller

invite you to share in
their marriage celebration

Saturday, the fourteenth of March
Two thousand and nine
at Half past seven in the evening

Place
City, New York

Dinner and Dancing to Follow

I like everything but I want to make sure the 'invite you to share in their marriage celebration' makes sense... PS Not worried about capitals etc the font in all caps. Thx!

I think it sounds fine or you could say
'in the celebration of their marriage'
or
'in celebrating their marriage' but I think it sounds good the way it is.

mine says 'at the celebration of the Nuptial Mass'

I'll just write the exact phrasing...
Mr & Mrs
request the honour of your presense at the marriage of their daughter

katie
to
Johno

asking the blessing of God upon this union at the celebration of the nuptial mass

sat 17th....etc.

Mine says:

Mr. and Mrs. _________
and
Mr. and Mrs. _________
Request the pleasure of your company
at the marriage of their children
______________
and
______________

our is:
It is with joy that we
latoya blah blah
and
eric blah blah
invote you to celebrate as we exchange our wedding vows
on April 18 09

Thanks all!
I went with invite you to share in the celebration of their marriage.
: )