Invite wording - POLL!
I am making my cousin's wedding invites. She wants her parents (including deceased father) mentioned as hosts. They already have two sons and would like them mentioned on the invite. Does this sound awkward?
You are cordially invited to attend
the marriage of
Mary Smith
Daughter of
Mrs. Mary Smith and the late
Mr. Joseph Smith
to
Mr. Robert Jones
as they exchange vows and together
with their sons, Michael and Sean,
celebrate their family
Friday, the twelfth of November
at six o'clock in the evening
The Inn on the Lake
Anytown, New York
***ETA*** - I totally forgot the parent's names...Now how does it sound?
You are cordially invited to attend
the marriage of
Mary Smith
Daughter of
Mrs. Mary Smith and the late
Mr. Joseph Smith
to
Mr. Robert Jones
as they exchange vows and together
with their sons, Michael and Sean,
celebrate their family
Friday, the twelfth of November
at six o'clock in the evening
The Inn on the Lake
Anytown, New York
***ETA*** - I totally forgot the parent's names...Now how does it sound?
