Invite writing ...

This is what I have. The invitations are square and I want to put a quote on the top left and this on the bottom right. Is it correct?

Mr. and Mrs. Jerry XX
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Lea Nicole
to
Bradley Kurtis
son of
Mr. and Mrs. Richard XX
Saturday, the thirteenth of November
Two thousand and four
at half past ten o'clock in the morning
Glen Head Gospel Meeting House
Glen Head, New York

Also, do I include his parents or not? My parents are paying for the reception. His parents are paying for the photography, florist and rehersal dinner.