mzmahagony
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TOGETHER WITH OUR FAMILIES,
WE INVITE YOU TO SHARE IN OUR JOY
AND SUPPORT OUR LOVE
AS WE EXCHANGE VOWS
And are united in the comitment of marriage
Kamai XXXX
And
Kahlil XXXXX
ON THURSDAY, THE FIRST OF JULY
TWO THOUSAND AND TEN
AT HALF AFTER SEVEN IN THE EVENING
CHATEAU BRIAND
440 OLD COUNTRY ROAD
CARLE PLACE, NY 11514
ADULT ONLY RECEPTION IMMEDIATELY FOLLOWING
halfbaked
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Sounds right to me! Except the beginning. It looks like a mistake actually
I think it should read:
Together with our families,
We invite you to share in our joy,
And support our love,
As we exchange vows in the commitment of marriage.
I could be wrong though, my brain doesn't work right on Mondays.
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Future Mrs H
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the 4th line 'And are invited...'
How about
'Witness the commitment of marriage between'
X
and
X
or something like that- i was never that good in English in school
Future Mrs H
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I like Jillians better than mine
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cateydee
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Posted by Future Mrs H
the 4th line 'And are invited...'
How about
'Witness the commitment of marriage between'
X
and
X
or something like that- i was never that good in English in school
ITA
ETA i like both suggestions actually
Noelsgirl
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put
Adult only reception immediately following
mzmahagony
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Thanks ladies, I'm making all the changes that you suggest. How about now?
Noelsgirl
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Posted by mzmahagony
TOGETHER WITH OUR FAMILIES,
WE INVITE YOU TO SHARE IN OUR JOY
AND SUPPORT OUR LOVE
AS WE EXCHANGE VOWS in the commitment of marriage.
Do it like that Kamai!! When you put exchnage vows more than once it's redundant
Noelsgirl
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Oh ok, I see you change it
mzmahagony
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Posted by Noelsgirl
Posted by mzmahagony
TOGETHER WITH OUR FAMILIES,
WE INVITE YOU TO SHARE IN OUR JOY
AND SUPPORT OUR LOVE
AS WE EXCHANGE VOWS in the commitment of marriage.
Do it like that Kamai!! When you put exchange vows more than once it's redundant
Thx mama, I just noticed that, I changed it.
Noelsgirl
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Its perfect now!!
mzmahagony
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Posted by Noelsgirl
Its perfect now!!
thx
halfbaked
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Ahh that's perfect! I'm so bookmarking this. LOL! I need to print my invites soon!
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mzmahagony
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Posted by jilliibabii
Ahh that's perfect! I'm so bookmarking this. LOL! I need to print my invites soon! ![]()
Thanks a lot for your help.
Rosalind_75
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its great!!
heres mine fellow CB bride
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