I have posted in the past that FH aunt said the word *united* is very non-jewish and asked me to change the wording.
United was used twice in my invite and my invite ask if there was another word I would like to use instead of having *joined* twice.
Please help
Wording as of now:
Two lives, Two Hearts Joined together in friendship UNITED forever in love (top corner)
Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are UNITED in marriage. (middle part)
Pic in my ablums if you need to see the whole thing
TIA Ladies
adelya21
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Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS.
Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are JOINED in marriage
HSsweethearts
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Posted by adelya21
Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS.
Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are JOINED in marriage
The only problem with this is that in the very traditional jewish ceremony, the couple does not EXCHANGE vows, it's an acquisition.
Kuklitsa143
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Posted by HSsweethearts
Posted by adelya21
Together with their parents invite you to share in a celebration of love as they EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS.
Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are JOINED in marriage
The only problem with this is that in the very traditional Jewish ceremony, the couple does not EXCHANGE vows, it's an acquisition.
This
I just need a really good thesaurus LOL
BENETTA2012
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BEFORE ASKING FOR SUGGESTIONS, DO YOU AND FH LIKE THE WORDING AS IS?
Kuklitsa143
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The wording is fine but I don't want to be frown on
that a BIG NO- NO with FILs LOL
adelya21
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really im jewish and went to jewish school all my life and never heard of that lol well then I propose the latter lol
Posted by Kuklitsa143
Posted by HSsweethearts
Posted by adelya21
Together with their parents invite you to share in a celebration of love as they EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS.
Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are JOINED in marriage
The only problem with this is that in the very traditional Jewish ceremony, the couple does not EXCHANGE vows, it's an acquisition.
This
I just need a really good thesaurus LOL
BENETTA2012
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SO WHY STRESS OVER IT....ITS JUST 4 WORDS ON A PIECE OF PAPER...AND SADLY, FOR MOST PEOPLE, THE INVITES JUST END UP IN THE GARBAGE...I DONT THINK ANYONE WILL HARP ON JOIN VERSUS UNITED VERSUS ANYTHING ELSE YOU WIND UP PUTTING IN THERE.....DID YOU ASK THE FIL HER SUGGESTION AS TO THE WORDING?
adelya21
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ehh if its religiously frowned upon and she has many religious people attending they will. Plus if the in laws won't like it I wouldnt do it lol.
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SO WHY STRESS OVER IT....ITS JUST 4 WORDS ON A PIECE OF PAPER...AND SADLY, FOR MOST PEOPLE, THE INVITES JUST END UP IN THE GARBAGE...I DONT THINK ANYONE WILL HARP ON JOIN VERSUS UNITED VERSUS ANYTHING ELSE YOU WIND UP PUTTING IN THERE.....DID YOU ASK THE FIL HER SUGGESTION AS TO THE WORDING?
Kuklitsa143
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ehh if its religiously frowned upon and she has many religious people attending they will. Plus if the in laws won't like it I wouldnt do it lol.
Posted by BENETTA2012
SO WHY STRESS OVER IT....ITS JUST 4 WORDS ON A PIECE OF PAPER...AND SADLY, FOR MOST PEOPLE, THE INVITES JUST END UP IN THE GARBAGE...I DONT THINK ANYONE WILL HARP ON JOIN VERSUS UNITED VERSUS ANYTHING ELSE YOU WIND UP PUTTING IN THERE.....DID YOU ASK THE FIL HER SUGGESTION AS TO THE WORDING?
this!!!!!!
adelya21
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i know this probably wont help you lol but just in case this is what we used
The harmony of Love meets with the melody of Life to create our Beautiful Love Song…
Mr. Ramiz Mamedov & Mrs. Khanna Mamedova cordially invite you to the marriage of their daughter
Adelya to Gerard Christopher Peyer
son of Mr. Gerard Peyer & Mrs. Lisa A. Peyer
Sunday, the fifth of June Two thousand and eleven at half past five o’clock in the evening Woodbury Country Club 884 Jericho Turnpike Woodbury, NY
Reception to follow Black Tie Attire Preferred
Kuklitsa143
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Thanks so much for your input and your invite sound so romantic and sweet - Congrats
I can't put names for other reason (long story) I will just ask the Aunt who giving the issues to come up with the wording LOL
BENETTA2012
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I THINK ULTIMATELY WHATEVER YOU CHOOSE WILL BE PERFECT!!!....THE MOST IMPORTANT THING IS ALWAYS HAVING THE SUPPORT OF FH IN EVERY DECISION, WEDDING RELATED OR NOT!...I THINK IF YOU BOTH ARE IN AGREEMENT WITH THE FINAL WORDING, THE INVITATIONS WILL BE FINE WITH EVERYONE ELSE...AFTER ALL, AS CHEESY AS IT SOUNDS, YOUR WEDDING IS REALLY ABOUT YOU AND FH JOINING LIVES TOGETHER AND TAKING VOWS, NOT WORDING ON INVITES OR CENTERPEICES OR ANY OF THE OTHER 'STUFF' :)
adelya21
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ye make them do the work! lol
Posted by Kuklitsa143
Thanks so much for your input and your invite sound so romantic and sweet - Congrats
I can't put names for other reason (long story) I will just ask the Aunt who giving the issues to come up with the wording LOL
pjc92980
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I personally like your wording and think if they arent happy with it they should come up with something else! But how about this:
Two lives, Two Hearts Joined together in friendship Bonded (or'Connected') forever in love
Together with their parents invite you to share in a celebration of love as they wed (or just 'as they get married)
