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my donation cards...with PIC!

cateydee Posted:

my donation cards...with PIC!

hopefully this works
whaddya think? the lines are messed up cuz i changed the format, but it doesnt really look like that.

eta- any input on the wording is appreciated- it doesnt sound quite right!
20mrsc10 Posted:

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very cute!!

joctorre Posted:

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very nicely done. I love it!!!

Clover23 Posted:

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i would say '... thank you for celebrating with us on our wedding day.' instead of 'sharing our wedding day with us.'

rhymes better and i don't know that sharing is the right word. jmo. otherwise it looks nice!!!
Clover23 Posted:

Re: my donation cards...with PIC!

also, verb agreement - it should be 'receive' not 'receives'

NYYankeeGirl72 Posted:

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so adorable!!!
cateydee Posted:

Re: my donation cards...with PIC!


Posted by Clover23

also, verb agreement - it should be 'receive' not 'receives'



yeah that one i put receives cuz of 'family member'. thats the sentence i hate.

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