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My Invitation PROOF!!!!!

mybabylovesmoi Posted:

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Posted by mybabylovesmoi

v it looks great! Okay, I have one critique on the wording though, but it's probably my OCD . I would remove your name from the first line

'Mr. and Mrs. David and Veronica Canizalez request the honor of your presence at the marriage of their daughter
Veronica Lizbeth'

because the way this sentence is worded implies that Veronica Lizbeth is the daughter of Veronica Canizalez.... Do you know what I mean or am i getting too english major nerdy?!






=-)
Veronica Lizeth (Me) IS the daugther of Veronica Canizalez (my mom)
we got the same name Just Different middle names....



ahhhh gotcha! then it's perfect
tateyana17 Posted:

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YOu invites are absolutely beautiful!! Love the colors you chose

rosatemp Posted:

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very pretty
tac30 Posted:

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I think its good the way it is!!! its very pretty!

Sunshine2815 Posted:

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I love it!!!!!!
rendel Posted:

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So pretty V!!!!!!!!!!

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