http://evenstarpaperie.com/Portfolio/In-Progress/Gisella/slides/gisella001.html I think it might be too wordy. I might just take the parents name out. Girls i need help what do you think? Tessa is great for those who are still looking for invites i really suggest you go check out her work.. very talented and affordable
i think it may be a little too wordy but i wouldnt take the parents names out unless they arent paying at all and you dont mind not having their names mentioned. I would change the other wording a bit...'as they share ..... you dont have to write all of that.... but they are so gorgeous! love them!
gisellav
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no we are paying but just to honor them. Yeah i am going to try to change the wording. Thanks :)
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I think its pretty. One suggestion.... the word 'And' in between yours and FHs name is a little too strong looking. Maybe change the font color? JMO
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Here you go:
Thanks i still dont know how to put pics up..
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Not sure how you can change the wording, sorries! But the invitations are very pretty!!
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I think its pretty. One suggestion.... the word 'And' in between yours and FHs name is a little too strong looking. Maybe change the font color? JMO
Thats what jeff said. Yeah he said to change it to bronze or light brown :) damn it i didnt wanna prove him right
I think its pretty. One suggestion.... the word 'And' in between yours and FHs name is a little too strong looking. Maybe change the font color? JMO
I agree !! I think that you can remove the parents names, but leave the phrase above.
It is beautiful!! Tessa does do great work!!
The phrase above is from the notebook. we love love that movie.
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i love them!! alot of wording though, there looks like a typo between 'matrimony and with' they are too close together. they look great !!
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I think your invites are gorgeous! Def change AND to a lighter color. I don't think it's too wordy but if you feel that way, I am sure there are ways to shorten it. It's really pretty though. Tessa does beautiful work. I have to look into her very soon.
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Love them hall twin!!! There is alot of information on there, but people appreciate that!
We both have the Chateau Brian pic on our invites!!
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They look great. BTW it looks like you might need a space between the word 'Matrimony' and 'With'.
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You're right - pretty wordy but the design is beautiful!
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I love the ribbon everything came out great
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If you're looking to make any changes, I agree with changing the AND to a lighter color or an ampersand, and possibly remove the line 'as they begin their new life together', just for the sake of saving space/making it less wordy. Otherwise, it's a beautiful invite!
