Need an opinion with a vote

I asked this last week, but I have narrowed it down to these two.

I am having this engraved for FI's cousin who is my BM.

We are not very close, but we care about each other.

We really don't hang out other than family functions.

Which do you like???? I am only allowed 3 lines.


Got a better one?

Thanks

1.
It means so much to me that you were here by my side

2.
Today my bridesmaid,
Always my friend


ETA: Do you need a period when you engrave??????

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Posted by Regal Beagle

I asked this last week, but I have narrowed it down to these two.

I am having this engraved for FI's cousin who is my BM.

We are not very close, but we care about each other.

We really don't hang out other than family functions.

Which do you like???? I am only allowed 3 lines.


Got a better one?

Thanks

1.
It means so much to me that you were here by my side

2.
Today my bridesmaid,
Always my friend


ETA: Do you need a period when you engrave??????

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what are you engraving?

A jewelry box

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Posted by Mich0621

I am thinking 2-sounds more hopeful

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Hopeful???? Am I that bad?????

#1 sounds too generic/cold. like 'thanks a lot' kind of sentiment--not too sincere


#2 sounds like you are hoping to remain friends for a long time....i think its a more sincere sentiment. who knows, as the years go on, she could become closer to you!