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Need help rhyming with too!!

mbm698 Posted:

Need help rhyming with too!!

We've decided to give bialys as a favor at our wedding. (My FMIL had a massive stroke and won't be to come to the wedding -- she loved bialys so its our way of including her in our wedding). This is the message we want to put on the favor--but I can't figure out what to how to rhyme finish the sentence about the Sunday paper-- any thoughts ladies????

'Thank you for sharing our special day with us. We hope you enjoyed yourself as much as we did.

Now that you celebrated the night with us,

Sleep in tomorrow morning and enjoy breakfast without any fuss,

Inside this bag are bialys, cream cheese and orange juice,

Please don’t forget to take the Sunday paper too.

The bialys in your bag are from a bialy store on the lower east side where John’s parents grew up. Mom always enjoyed the bialys from Kossars and we hope you enjoy them too.'

Thanks for your help.


Annoulak Posted:

Re: Need help rhyming with too!!

I'm sorry, I'm confused...you've already rhymed the too...do you not want 2 'too's?

lilangel369 Posted:

Re: Need help rhyming with too!!

'Thank you for sharing our special day with us. We hope you enjoyed yourself as much as we did.

Now that you celebrated the night with us,

Sleep in tomorrow morning and enjoy breakfast without any fuss,

Inside this bag are bialys, cream cheese and orange juice,

Please don’t forget to take the Sunday paper with you .

The bialys in your bag are from a bialy store on the lower east side where John’s parents grew up. Mom always enjoyed the bialys from Kossars and we hope you enjoy them too.'

how's that?
Brat23 Posted:

Re: Need help rhyming with too!!

How about this? Just a thought....

Now that you have celebrated the night away with us........

Enjoy some breakfast with out any fuss.....

these Bialy's were sent to you with centiment and love.....

And the most delicious cream chesse that came from up above.....

John's parents have a secret you know they cannot hide......

They grew up eating these Bialy's on the Lower eastside.......

Kossar's Bakery, Oh how Mom loved them so......

And don't forget your newspaper before you pack up and go.........

something to that affect then a little thanks for coming yadda yadda

Hope I didn't offend you by changing it just trying to help a fellow bride

I think it is an adorable idea and so sweet to include his Mom
lucamon Posted:

Re: Need help rhyming with too!!


Posted by Brat23

How about this? Just a thought....

Now that you have celebrated the night away with us........

Enjoy some breakfast with out any fuss.....

these Bialy's were sent to you with centiment and love.....

And the most delicious cream chesse that came from up above.....

John's parents have a secret you know they cannot hide......

They grew up eating these Bialy's on the Lower eastside.......

Kossar's Bakery, Oh how Mom loved them so......

And don't forget your newspaper before you pack up and go.........

something to that affect then a little thanks for coming yadda yadda

Hope I didn't offend you by changing it just trying to help a fellow bride

I think it is an adorable idea and so sweet to include his Mom


you are very good.
mbm698 Posted:

Re: Need help rhyming with too!!

Thanks so much. That was exactly what I was trying to do.. but couldn't get it .. Your wonderful.

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