Need help with invites...

So I need to go finalize my invites this week with the wording all done. Although me and fh will be paying for the wedding, we still want to include our parents names on the invite. So, I've come up with this:

Bride
&
Groom
together with their parents
Bride Parents
&
Groom Parents
request the honor of your presence as they unite in marriage on
June 14th 2008
2:30 PM
Corpus Christi Church
(church address).

I'm pretty sure it will fit, I kinda have a small invite. Sounds good?

Now, I'm having trouble with the rest.

I have this for the reception:

Adult reception to follow
7:00 PM
Terrace On The Park

Is this too boring?

Lastly, I just can't figure out the rsvp... I want 'number attending' on it somewhere but I just can't find anything I like.
Any suggestions?

Sorry so long...

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Posted by smplynluv

Now, I'm having trouble with the rest.

I have this for the reception:

Adult reception to follow
7:00 PM
Terrace On The Park

Is this too boring?

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Maybe just change this part to:

Adult reception to follow
Terrace on the Park
7pm

I think its fine....
You just might want to include the time for the church LOL

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Posted by RKellner

I think its fine....
You just might want to include the time for the church LOL

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Ah! Oh that would be smart right? lol ok fixed

For the RSVP I would also add the address of the place:

Adult reception to follow
at seven o'clock in the evening
Terrace on the Park
address of place

The for the rsvp, this is what we're doing:

We look forward to celebrating with you
Kindly respond by May 1, 2008
M ______________________________
____ persons will attend
____ not able to attend

Even though 'number' is not there, it is expected that they fill in the number of 'persons' in the line.

HTH!

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Posted by Emily08

For the RSVP I would also add the address of the place:

Adult reception to follow
at seven o'clock in the evening
Terrace on the Park
address of place

The for the rsvp, this is what we're doing:

We look forward to celebrating with you
Kindly respond by May 1, 2008
M ______________________________
____ persons will attend
____ not able to attend

Even though 'number' is not there, it is expected that they fill in the number of 'persons' in the line.

HTH!

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Thanks! Yes the rsvp helps. But do you think I need to include the address of the rh if I'm sending direction cards?