*Need your Suggestions**

Jayla127 Posted: Aug 23, 2008 11:53 PM

*Need your Suggestions**

I'm working with Tessa from Evenstar Paperie for my invites. She sent me this design

What do you think? Does anything need to be changed (font, text alignment)

Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated?

TIA

jeffamanda080808 Posted: Aug 23, 2008 11:58 PM

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I'm not great with spelling and punctuation...but it's a gorgeous invite and I love the layout!

bigrd37 Posted: Aug 24, 2008 12:27 AM

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very pretty!!

JenBill61210 Posted: Aug 24, 2008 07:40 AM

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very nice! i think the wording is fine!

HamptonsBride Posted: Aug 24, 2008 09:36 AM

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i would just suggest moving the black type away from the borders a bit so there is a more even spacing around them..see below

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Kricket212 Posted: Aug 24, 2008 09:43 AM

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It looks good.......you sure are an early bird to be getting them for Nov 2009. Congrats on being so organzied.

LoriBeth2728 Posted: Aug 25, 2008 10:14 AM

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Very pretty and unique!
I agree w/having more space between the words and border

08JulyBride Posted: Aug 25, 2008 10:31 AM

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Very nice! Is it your intent to have a middle initial for just 1 of you?

jennarose023 Posted: Aug 25, 2008 10:49 AM

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Posted by Jayla127

I'm working with Tessa from Evenstar Paperie for my invites. She sent me this design

What do you think? Does anything need to be changed (font, text alignment)

Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated?

TIA

very nice, but i would change the first line on the bottom paragraph to with blessing from THEIR parents instead of our...it just doesn't read right, at least to me

Shelleybean11 Posted: Aug 25, 2008 10:50 AM

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Very pretty invitation!!

Celeste617 Posted: Aug 25, 2008 03:12 PM

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Very pretty!

pa56 Posted: Aug 25, 2008 03:13 PM

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Looks great!! The only thing I would change is 'will be joined in marriage' to 'are joined in marriage'

deb2378 Posted: Aug 25, 2008 03:14 PM

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Very pretty!

allegracristina Posted: Aug 25, 2008 03:57 PM

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Posted by jennarose023

Posted by Jayla127

I'm working with Tessa from Evenstar Paperie for my invites. She sent me this design

What do you think? Does anything need to be changed (font, text alignment)

Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated?

TIA

very nice, but i would change the first line on the bottom paragraph to with blessing from THEIR parents instead of our...it just doesn't read right, at least to me

It's written in the first person, so changing it to 'their' parents would be incorrect. I think the invitation itself is beautiful, but I feel the first part turns into a run on sentence : 'Please accept our invitation to join family and friends in witnessing the sanctity of our love, devotion, and dedication to our new life as we, Angela and Thomas with the blessing of our parents, will be joined in marriage on Monday the Ninth of November...' It's all one sentence. It just seems very long to me. JMHO

Nurse12985 Posted: Aug 25, 2008 05:30 PM

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It looks incredible. I have an invitation that I would love to have replicated for my own wedding does she do things like that?

leeserd Posted: Aug 25, 2008 05:30 PM

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I think its VERY pretty and actually I love it but I don't think it looks like a wedding invitation. It looks like a party invite to me

MrsList09 Posted: Aug 26, 2008 08:25 PM

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I might change the font type. Otherwise it's beatiful. I'm working with Tessa too. She does gorgeous work. I'm Allison in the Works in Progress. Good luck! You're off to a great start with that design.